Reviews for Open Eyes
JEbb chapter 1 . 5/5/2003
Another beautiful tale wonderfully charming as always

many thanks
White Wolf1 chapter 1 . 5/5/2003
This was cute. I love the way you handled Merry and Pippin's reaction. I'd thought of writing a story just like this. YOu beat me to it!
Rumplebumple chapter 1 . 5/4/2003
Awesome! You captured Tolkien's characterizations perfectly, especially with the hobbits! Merry and especially Pippin are so innocent and unlearned at the beginning of the stories and that's what I saw here. I always thought it was sad that they lost their innocence the way they did. I hope this isn't your last chapter, or your last story!
Luinedhel chapter 2 . 5/4/2003
I believe he was born a 1-3 yrs after War of the Ring.i'm not exactly u going to right a story w/ him in it? If so, I think that it is a great idea.
Nilmandra chapter 1 . 5/4/2003
How kind of Legolas to finish the hobbits watch.

How hilarious of Legolas to make Aragorn finish it with him!

I can just see all the hobbits staring at the sleeping elf!
Chanra chapter 2 . 5/4/2003
My dad and I (oh yeah, proper grammer *gag*) sleep with our eyes open. It's quite amusing to see others freak out. :)
Selendrile chapter 1 . 5/4/2003
Snags along the way (among others, it's spelled "Sindarin", not "Sindarian", and I have trouble picturing a giggling elf), but overall decently written with a cute premise.

Keep writing. Cheers.
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