I like it. Good story so far with a more powerful than canon Naruto so all is good. As long as there is no harems or creepy age inappropriate relationships later on we're good.

Okay, this is just a rehash of the main story. A "smarter" Naruto yet the plot remains unchanged (so far). An epitome of both the majority of non-AU fanfictions and lazy writing. Unless you want to read a lot of pointless bashing, glazing and a Naruto who is more "powerful" (quotations due to his power not mattering almost at all in 15 chapters I've read), then there is nothing for you here. It's probably more fun to just re-watch/read anime/manga.

I think your story is great and anyone giving you shit should fuck off like you said. keep on writing dude

finally! On with the shipping!

i found this from an ao3 naruto fic saying it was inspired by this. having read 3 chapters of this, its less "inspired by" and more "plagiarized from" see "A flash of supplements" by joestar94. its literally word for word

I'm so glad to know that you're OK I know that was a while ago, but I'm glad to know that whatever it was, you're OK Also don't listen to any Trash talk Constructive criticism Is one thing don't listen to Bullcrap

I like this story the only problem I have is sasuke I don't really like the "im an uchiha elite" trope very much

it was very good and well explained chapter , the way you gave the details of every jutsu was great.

And you lost me.. not living in family home til the end of story

Waste

Started reading this today so i know there is more but despite this chapter is a bit more stale then the others its still pretty good. Will keep reading.

Not really sure I like Fox Summons... Gonna be problematic to the village, and the toads can help with Senjutsu, not sure if the foxes can. We shall see what you have in store for us, I guess.

I know I'm a lil bit late but doesn't that count as a preorder on dsnzos behalf

Please, forgive me, Honorable Author: this … is not good (sucks)!
The protagonist gets pumped up: stronger, smarter and faster … than originally He is …
or at least he is said to be…
We do not know, how he looks … unless you have seen the movie, because it is like there…
He has moves … so awesome … we cannot judge it for ourselves: it is not written for us, we are just informed that it is awesome…
Finally: the guy is smart … or we are told so … and we have to told: because he acts stupid…
(Plot holes are introduced by the fact: super Naruto is forced back into the old story line; the story line that smart hero finds himself in the old stupid situations does require difficult explanations…)

A little pathetic and repetitive storyline in MY OPINION.