why does everyone and their mom make him go on the training trip it. literal none of the other characters ever do this maybe 6 months at most it so annoying no one let's him grow in the village with peers and mission. I mean konaha teamwork and bonds, Naruto involved solo training and solitude does no one else find that annoying the guy who deserves most always denied it it's not like you can't do a 3 year skip with leaving the village and just give a summary of mission ranks and his bingo book after 3 years

And why the fuck are you writing this? It's a fanfic. The point of a fanfic is CHANGE. In the end, it's just canon. Honestly all the characters here were on Sasuke's level, all disgusting. Dobe changed but stayed the same because of blah, blah, blah, a bunch of excuses for being too lazy to change a plot.

thanks for writing this I originally started it when you had less than a dozen chappy's and lost it.
but I have a to say it definitely hit the spot. thank you for continuing it in a sequel. I'm going over to read that now. ja ne.

I love ur work and all but Kakashi would never choose Sasuke over Naruto likee that if Naruto knew the basics and would probably just make a shadow clone and hand him a few jutsu at the very least or smtg.

Just putting this out there, since I randomly had an infatuation with wolves, foxes, hawks, snakes, etc. when I was younger. Foxes do not form packs, they wander in solitude, meaning they would more than likely be like the snake summoners, meaning they wouldn't have an actual clan but instead give contracts individually.

I noticed a lot of Naruto fan fics had the misconception that Foxes love hanging out with each other and made them into a clan like the Gama clan. Instead in actuality, just like in road to ninja, it would only be a contract to Kurama specifically.

chakra unlock? That's not how chakra works! I am dropping it.

Itachi became a missing nin when naruto was 8 not 4.

I think you forgot that Ino, Sakura, and the rest of Sasuke's fangirls all saw him get beaten by Naruto during the Genin Graduation test.

Alright author…I’m going to be brutally honest. Youre response to the hate comments… I fucking LOVE them dude XXDDDDD I’m literally wheezing bro, good on you for shitting on those sorry excuses we call pos’s. Anyway, story wise so far, 9/10 the pacing was off in the beginning by ALOT but other than that you have a very good, enjoyable story here big man. Thanks for posting it and completing it unlike many others.b

The first thing I'd like to say to you is you're an absolutely great writer. no matter what anyone says I also wanna point out that they seem to get that with fan fictions. You can write anything you want. It's in the name of fan version. So it's your interpretation of how things go. Your word is law. I have read your story about. 10 times now. You are definitely a talented writer. I now say this with impunity. that anyone who has a problem with this story that is definitely your opinion. But I'd like to see any of you. make a. 200,000 word. plus writing and publish it for people to Read. that takes some formidable fortitude. I really like your creative way. of thinking about things and explaining things. And even though I should be saying this I should mention this about you're at the store. I'll just leave it here for a simplicity. sake and not tediousness. I would say that you could definitely take ascendance, of the Flash. and make it I believe. 1000 times the success of the return of the flash mean I think would be a great thing for you to complete it. or add to it, but also that is your choice. I will end us with saying no matter what anyone says, you have a great talent for writing and not only do I see what you Wanna say in your mind? And what ideas you had. This opportunity to say this, if no one has. Thank you so very much for taking your bat and your most valuable resource. That is time to write this story. and the one preceding it. Thank you. warrior contribution. to the Naruto fandom on this site.

Naruto is such a fucking idiot. I’m not even going to read the last chapter because you have ruined the main character with this idiotic fucking decision. I’ve lost all respect for the mc and the fucking asshole moron writer behind it.

News of orichimaru is a little more important than some stupid rules in a test. Iruka proves he’s a moron with that stupid shit.

Good yet a few things are off. Fyi your mindscape is not something you can control without years of practice. Since it is a subonscious thing. It is how you feel, see the world and how you are with things. Narutos was a boiler room not sewers.

Since when does the hokage or council have the authority to force a clan member much less a clan head into a political marriage doesn’t this violate village bylaws. They could certainly present the offer to naruto and try to pressure him through different means but ultimately the choice is Naruto’s to make.

My mind was blown. I loved this chapter! I especially enjoyed the Hokages being together. Then Naruto who beats Neji, beats Gaara/Shikoku, frees both Hokage from being controlled, scares off Orochimaru then asks Hiruzen if he can be churning.