Reviews for Return of the Flash
Birdly The Reaper Of Souls chapter 22 . 4/4
allowed to live in his parents' house.
Should of been their in chap 4...
Only get to live their for what 10 chaps...

Bro honesty.. lost interest ...
Guest chapter 30 . 3/23
NOICE
drathgure chapter 31 . 3/15
when is the next chapter coming out
HyperA2019 chapter 18 . 3/8
Is there a sequel to this story?
Advent of Shadows chapter 5 . 3/6
Not giving Naruto a chakra network is weird and enough to make me drop the story here. It makes Naruto immune to Gentle Fist and the vast majority of Genjutsu. It also breaks a number of important rules in the series that kill any faith I have in the story being well written.
Tiger 6329 chapter 31 . 2/21
finished story
22:49 wed 21/02/2023
truly end of an era
looking forward to reading your latest update
thank you for making my extremely boring days happy
love from my side
peace...
Guest chapter 10 . 2/18
Flaming the haters? I love it! I really hate how flamers cause authors to become discouraged. I appreciate your stick-to-it-tive-ness. Looking forward to reading more. Keep being you man!
Guest chapter 6 . 2/17
The average height of a twelve-year-old Japanese boy is around 5 foot 5 or 5 foot 6. Therefore, Naruto would be considered short at 5 feat tall.
Falvern chapter 3 . 2/9
Eh. There are a lot of cliches so far. A lot of authors play up Naruto's negative treatment by the villagers. It was mostly neglect. No mention of any kind of physical abuse, let alone attempted murder, was ever hinted at or implied. I thought people stopped doing that kind of thing back in like 2012. Its quite strange that a boy who apparently has been beaten to near death multiple times and has people come at him with knives, apparently wants to become Hokage.

Your writing is otherwise solid.
Guest chapter 16 . 1/22
Missed opportunity to put Mito Uzumaki and/or Kushina in the list of previous Fox Summoners. OCs are cringe.
Ophis-The-Infinite-Dragon-God chapter 6 . 1/4
So this is just a copy of canon, guess this is where I drop; sad to see this being another lazy copy where nothing changes besides mc acting like a schizo at points.
Ophis-The-Infinite-Dragon-God chapter 4 . 1/4
It's really dumb introducing Naruto to his parents family home and then having him get an apartment while being refused entry to his family home until he's married, that's a seriously communist way of handling what is 'his'. Is the sword and fuinjutsu volumes going to be taken by the village too saying they will hold onto them for when he's married too?
halo4hire chapter 31 . 12/28/2023
Biggest problem I have with this is the lemons. He's 13. Ain't even hit puberty yet and you have him bedding his wife IN DETAIL. At least age them up or something.

I know someone is gonna reply to me sawing stuff like that's expected for their time, or some such and I ask, if that's the case, why have the detailed description when it really isn't needed? Only one word comes to mind for people who enjoy reading about children having sex and it ain't nice.
dastewie2012 chapter 19 . 12/23/2023
Flash to orochimaru and shoot him back using the hirashin again. No escape
Guest chapter 8 . 12/21/2023
Gg
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