Honestly a very great read. Made me cry a few times but in a good way ya know.

Oh Thank GOD! I was scared that Hiruzen was going to die nonetheless, just like in some other Naruto FF! Thank goodness. This was, I think, one of the best chapters of this fanfic, author-san!

Lol Naruto just used his big brain...
All according to KEIKAKU

Uh, the blushing of Temari was quite OoC... But if Naruto is VERY handsome... Then I guess I can let it pass lol. But really though, watching Naruto, I felt like Temari was a prideful lady, who has a strong personality... So I thought, maybe Naruto would have needed to show his strength to her first. But nevertheless, it's all good.

I tried reading this shit. I really tried. I knew from the first chapter that this fic will have all the worst trashy troupes in the Naruto fandom from the mob beatings and civie council but I tried to keep going simply because this promised to be a genius Naruto. This chapter killed it for me. There is a difference between hiding your abilities and just straight up being retarded by not showing any ability at all. Hard Pass

Kakashi vs Gai part 2 lmfaooo

I find it a little bit ridiculous that Naruto had to resort to using Kurama's chakra to deal with the cure mark seeing how he has ocean's worth of it.
Good fight nonetheless, and I'm sure he still held back a bit as to not injure Sasuke too much.

This is awesome.

while I agree with his assessment of Tsunade completely, the hiraishin isn't a physical attack. I also always thought being a medic with haemophilia was one of the stupidest most illogical concepts. Why'd Tsunade take a sword toy he stomach when Naruto literally could have just flashed away? cool she accepted the hokage position but that was still unnecessary. Finally, a situation that pulls are two teens together again? Nice! :3

Just finished reading this for the 2nd time it's so good!

good to see how critical of Tsunade naruto is, tho I disagree, she is not hot at all. her proportions are so odd and exaggerated xD b-c cup is best size at least to me.

can't hiruzen hold out till then?

...I thought that Naruto would be one the next hokage since hiruzen lived? he's getting robbed of that still?

Instead of punching orochimaru when he was able to take him by surprise, why didn't he just behead him? it would have taken the same amount of time but permanently end him instead of him escaping. that aside, loved the fight with Takeshi and I absolutely loved the moments with Naruto and temari :3

instead of punching Gaara at the end on his nose, he could have used that moment to apply the seal.