Reviews for Return of the Flash
Spedyalarm chapter 1 . 6/5/2023
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Did Naruto just set a speed record for befriending the Nine-Tailed Fox?
Scattershot666 chapter 31 . 5/13/2023
This was a really cool take on the series, part of why I'm not crazy about Naruto as a character is his only moves are shadow clones and rasengan spammed over and over and it got dull really quickly.
abd4029 chapter 16 . 5/1/2023
Did u copy this from Of Harrowed Hearts. jk lol. I love that u gave him a fox contract did u give them foxfire, if u did i guess ill find out later. Good job love the story
abd4029 chapter 14 . 5/1/2023
i know im a couple years late lol. love the story and ur brashness on rude readers. I get more comedy from u calling them out more than the story lol. Love this fic: no harem, no op naruto, great character development, great fight details, and i love Naruto's friendship with Kurama. Not flattering u but i wished U could give Kishimoto a few pointers cause god knows he needs it for boruto absolutely love ur story.
enmmar chapter 11 . 4/23/2023
good job with the words
Ascension of the Peverells chapter 15 . 4/16/2023
This is so confusing. I thought you said that his control over chakra pathway system is perfect because he didn’t have a chakra pathway system. And isn’t he a sealing master who read all his mother's notes? This is way too forced to make the plot work. This Naruto hasn’t done anything majorly different from his canon counterpart. Other than that, the progress of the story is excellent.
Guest chapter 6 . 4/6/2023
Flash Step? Really? Focusing chakra into your legs to increase your speed is exactly what the Shushin is. So you just stole a concept from Bleach that already existed in Naruto, and it’s supposed to be better… because you said so? That’s pretty bad writing.
UCHIWA69YUG chapter 11 . 3/27/2023
THIS CHAPTER WAS SO SICKKKKK! My favorite chapter yet
dastewie2012 chapter 30 . 3/27/2023
Sasuke lost any sort of mercy from naruto after the desertion and is being compounded there is no reason to listen to any of his wishes.
dastewie2012 chapter 30 . 3/27/2023
Everything about this screams dumbass. 1) hirashin marker on team 2) shadow clone spamming to assist before moving forward 3) kyubbi chakra refill 4) he didn’t cut off any limbs or hands of sasuke 5) he endangered his entire team unnecessarily
dastewie2012 chapter 29 . 3/27/2023
Just slam his head repeatedly into the floor. You did it with a tree and he was knocked out. Nothing stopping ya.
dastewie2012 chapter 29 . 3/27/2023
Naruto, weakened with five prong seal. Beats curse mark sasuke. Naruto full strength. Stronger sasuke with curse mark strong as naruto without kyubbi chakra? The inconsistency is flabbergasting.
dastewie2012 chapter 28 . 3/27/2023
The rasengan’s function really is confusing and inconsistent. Originally introduced it after like a drill that had a shockwave effect ignoring defense like that of the gentle fist, but more violent. Other times it’s just a drill. Other times it’s just a mini tailed beast bomb that explodes on contact
Guest chapter 18 . 3/24/2023
You’re a fucking dumb ass no one wants to read fuck flashback they are the dumbest shit ever especially when you can write it in. Instead of using a fuck flash back
Guest chapter 10 . 3/21/2023
Shut up
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