Reviews for The Hope of the Moon and Sun |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story keep it going |
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![]() ![]() ![]() we backkk |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good but um in your story you say Leto was around. You never showed her nor hinted at her until now. Also Yugito? She was never mentioned until now so it's very jarring. Plus why would she be here? I thought this story really loosely tide to Narutos dimensions plus only Naruto's parents could go back and forth between worlds. What reason would she even be here before other than being a harem member and human sacrifice that is relatable to Naruto? I hope you explain this eventually because we're 24 chapters in and there was no build for these two issues. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter, I look forward to the next one |
![]() ![]() ![]() Está cosa es una mrd, es súper pesada de leer y de paso haces que un hijo de Artemisa tenga harem, vaya y coma mrd mejor |
![]() ![]() interesting work |
![]() ![]() well that was an interesting and emotional chapter |
![]() ![]() Yeah I hope Aphrodite is in the harem of Naruto |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Aphrodite in this chapter it shows her domain properly who else can love their child more then the goddess of love and of course it hurts her to not be close to her children. Great chapter but I honestly forgot why he is looking for piper |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome work please continue the story it's incredible I am enjoying the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet but next chapter is gonna give me diabetes for sure |
![]() ![]() ![]() Niceness |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing to see an update! Can’t wait for more |