Reviews for Zabaniya: A Delusional Romance Between Assassin and Wizard
DracoKing30 chapter 21 . 12/25/2023
really love this story can't wait for new chapters
Mernom chapter 8 . 7/17/2023
I think I know who Dumbledore's associate is... Pretty sneaky to do so.
Mernom chapter 6 . 7/16/2023
Just because you're skipping writing out the whole conversation about the characters explaining the situation to one another, doesn't mean all of the characters should immediately know the other side's full story. There are some pieces of information that wouldn't get shared in the first meeting like this, either for brevity's sake, or because the other side didn't earn the trust to know those facts.

To me, it seemed odd that Ron knew that Medea is known as the 'Witch of Betrayal'. He's not the sort to know the legends of some important figures from Greek myth. Especially if he thought of it as a muggle myth.
This means that either the Chaldea team introduced their servants in way too much depth for the situation (see my first point), or that one of the local servants mentioned it (doesn't seen likely, as mentioning such a title is not very diplomatic, and they weren't present in any case). I just can't see it come up in the conversation in my head.
Mernom chapter 2 . 7/16/2023
First of all, I only read the first chapter so far. So if it ends up being rectefied further in, I have no way of knowing it right now, in which case feel free to discard this criticism.

Is this supposed to be a story about the romance between Harry and Mary? Because, IMO the 'how we got together' is a PRETTY important part of the story. Just skipping to 'and so we were a couple for two years now' really cheapens it.
Light Hero Kaiser chapter 21 . 1/11/2023
Most interesting great chapter mate can't wait for more
Argonaut986 chapter 21 . 11/18/2022
Well… that’s a big revelation.
Argonaut986 chapter 20 . 11/18/2022
Well… that was insightful.
Argonaut986 chapter 19 . 11/18/2022
Well… that’s interesting…
Argonaut986 chapter 18 . 11/18/2022
Well… that’s problematic…
Argonaut986 chapter 17 . 11/18/2022
Oh brother…
Argonaut986 chapter 16 . 11/18/2022
Well… that’s a problem…
Argonaut986 chapter 15 . 11/18/2022
Well… that’s problematic.
Argonaut986 chapter 14 . 11/17/2022
I enjoyed the fluff.
Argonaut986 chapter 13 . 11/17/2022
Well… talk about revelations…
Argonaut986 chapter 12 . 11/17/2022
Oh deer…
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