Reviews for His Loyal Pet |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really great read. Hope you are well and that your muse returns to you one day. Have an excellent day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope that you come back to this. It was a very nice read. I really hope a new chapter is released soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You haven't updated in a while. Lost your muse / interest in this fic / writing? You do have a life to live so, thank you for what you managed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like that Harry is taking Runes and Arithmancy, and ditched Divination. The notes in the texts are a nice touch too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am enjoying this re-read. Thank you for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good :) I like the little details so it isn't a condensed has of cannon. You somehow made the teachers smarter, and the world make a little more sense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() finally someone who noticed the deeply personal nature of that lesson. I'd imagine the twins would have a field day with that sort of knowledge. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such an amazing fic, absolutely love it. just kinda sad now that it's abandoned. much love! |
![]() ![]() Incredible. I've read countless stories and yours is the first of its kind. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very enjoyable story thanks for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() So often is the chamber glossed over in stories that I'm actually quite happy when it gets brought up. Yet this one makes it worse than not being brought up. First the altering of his accomplishment of doing it at 12. Yes its still only 14 but at such a young age its a wide enough gap. Second would be the goblin of all things just dropping the situation and not asking about that likely multi ton pile of expensive resources laying there in the chamber to rot. Seriously? Aside from that is Harry being told Albus is his magical guardian and nothing on his families will being mentioned. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hate aging up because people don't want to wait till they're older or start the story later for the intimate/lemons they want to write. Reading it saying fifteen my mind instantly says thirteen. Then says third year hadn't started and it goes oh yeah, maybe twelve. How his body looks, his twelve year old scrawny from malnourishment and age body? Thats going to annoy me as it pops up. Meh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Probably shouldn't post stories if you're too brain dead to finish them. Idiot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story hope you will update it again someday |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad that thus was dropped when things were coming to a head |