| Reviews for The Taste of Peaches |
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   Wordlurker chapter 4 . 7/17/2019 Looks good so far. TTP's own thread? So this is on SB, then? I guess I'll follow it over there instead of here. Keep up the good work. :) |
| Wordlurker chapter 2 . 7/17/2019 Ouch. Foxes, Industry, Agriculture, and Fertility? Those do not sound like the kind of domains that would be useful against an Entity. Awesome for a more peaceful world sure, but combat against a potentially world-destroying ancient alien monster? Let's hope that hinted-at Thunder domain has some firepower to play with. Either way, Taylor's got her work cut out for her... Which is about par for the course for this girl. |
| 1Batman4u chapter 4 . 7/15/2019 Cute foxy Taylor-chan for the win! |
| Hefster chapter 4 . 7/14/2019 interesting story |
| The Hero named Villain chapter 4 . 7/14/2019 Taylor not being chosen by Khepri or maz a kab, im ok with that. fluffly tails are OP. |
| SeanHicks4 chapter 4 . 7/12/2019 Interesting take, can’t wait to see a PHO interlude or something bringing up Inari claims to divinity and comparing it to Myrddin and his wizard act... |
| Gashadokuro Amanojaku chapter 4 . 7/12/2019 This is really well written. The words flow smoothly, making this a fluent read and the people’s reactions seem fitting to their current knowledge. Like Danny and Alan deciding to have a get-together with their families because they don’t know what happened between their daughters. I also like how Glenn is depicted here. Normally in fanfiction he is depicted as a guy no hero likes, because he restricts them. But here we see him competent in his job, giving elaborate reasons for his decisions. And then there is the fact that Taylor activated a certain power, when she was trying for another one. Surprised like that are always great and your reasoning for its appearance isn’t too farfetched in my opinion. |
| Gashadokuro Amanojaku chapter 1 . 7/12/2019 I wonder why you’ve chosen these three gods in particular. Is it because they’ve got experience with being in confined spaces? |
| Look what Jesus did chapter 4 . 7/10/2019 This is shaping up to be a great read and I hope it becomes one of the rare finished stories as so many like this are cut off so soon |
| mp3.1415player chapter 4 . 7/10/2019 A very promising start :) Now all we need is the next half million words or so! ;) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2019 This is great, I love your writing style. |
| ultima-owner chapter 4 . 7/9/2019 that was cool |
| KongouBongo chapter 4 . 7/9/2019 I pseudo-miko outfit would be interesting, nice chapter looking for more |
| KongouBongo chapter 3 . 7/9/2019 Not like Taylor can hide who she is, well at least now. Shapeshifting is a thing. Arcadia will be fun, I also can see the need to 'kill' the god thing coming from the entities. wurm universe seems very unspiritual. going to be interesting with the ABB. Inari was the most popular goddess (and still is) for a reason |
| KongouBongo chapter 2 . 7/9/2019 love Inari good choice, although amy would have been fun too. purity and legend would have had competition. |