Reviews for The Eye of the Phoenix (Original) |
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cm chapter 15 . 8/25 Thank you. Hope you are well and wishing you all the best. |
loki98065 chapter 15 . 7/18 just re read this after a long time. is really good. was looking forward to seeing what all the changes harry brought would lead. hela still odins daughter was a good twist. been watching what if s2 lol? |
lkdaswani chapter 15 . 1/23 As a writer myself, I can relate with your reason for re-writing the story, not that I'd say that this fic needs re-writing in any way or form- I found it perfect and engaging and yes, Harry might seem a tad bit overpowered but that's to be expected considering he is the Phoenix's chosen host. ((But yes, like I said, I can relate...whenever I read my past-written chapters I cringe so hard and wanna re-do it all so full support even if I LOVED THIS STORY)) The highlights for me were the scene where Harry meets Widow and Hawkeye for the first time and the snow falling in slow-motion, the scene in which Harry goes to the Siberian bunker and annihilates it. The saving of Bruce Banner was lovely but I'm most curious to see how Harry gels with Tony- these are two main characters of major franchises and seeing them together will be a TREAT! Throughout the fic, I also kept wondering whom you're going to pair Harry with- sometimes it felt like Natasha, in the last chapter it felt like he had some chemistry with Hela. (Or is it an M/M fic and you're gonna pair him with Steve? Bucky? OMG TONY?) Regardless of What comes, I LOVED THIS FIC. I have been reading this fic since the past three years and was thrilled to see that it had been updated and that you dear Author had no plans of abandoning it (re-writing, sure, but abandoning it would have broken my heart). I don't think I should make this comment any longer, I am not even sure if you'll read it but if you do, know that this fic was AMAZING and that I'll be here for the re-write too. Much warmth, Lkdaswani. |
MattBlack chapter 4 . 12/18/2023 I can agree with Thanos power level having the infinite stones, but comparing him WITHOUT them to an avatar of one of the two major powers in the MULTIVERSE? To be realistic, Harry should be to Steve, Nat and Clint, what stone powered Thanos is to Harry... |
DarkRavie chapter 15 . 12/12/2023 I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter. |
LoveGoodBooks86 chapter 15 . 10/31/2023 Hi, I want to thank you for a great read so far. I can’t wait to read the rest of your story and hope you’ll come back to it after your break over the last few months soon. Keep up the wonderful work! |
Bronze chapter 2 . 8/14/2023 Just as good as the first time I read it. Now if I'm right this next chapter is where I lost this story. I remember part of it but not the ending. Hopefully I can get to the fourth chapter now. |
Bronze chapter 1 . 8/14/2023 GOD knows and he ain't telling how many times I've started reading this! I get a few chapters in then lose it and forget I ever started it. Maybe this time I'll actually get to finish it. I've enjoyed the first chapter everytime I've read it and can't wait for Fury and SHEILD to attempt to tell Harry what he can or can't do. Really, I mean how could someone supposedly so smart think he or the organization he heads can tell a being of that immense power what they can or cannot do? Think of it as telling a bullet it can't kill you just because you say so! Is someone perhaps spiking his cigars with something strange? I know this is fan fiction, but he was never this dumb in the comics I use to read and collect! I truly hope that if Harry meets Captain America Steve isn't portrayed as he usually in in fan fiction stories. |
yudhazebba chapter 15 . 6/23/2023 Next |
SunPho3n1x chapter 15 . 6/12/2023 I really enjoyed this story. I’m sorry that you feel that you have outgrown it as a writer. I wish you the best on the rewrite. Thank you for writing this! |
realfan16 chapter 15 . 5/17/2023 This was good. tho i was more drawn in by the idea of Harry going all Fire Hulk on us. Always on the verge of impotent rage or overwhelming joy. scaring everyone besides Teddy by his 'lack' of control. Well it was still good. Loved how the events are spread out and not constantly in Harry's POV. Overall good job i say...the rewrite...I'll see if i can bear re reading the same plot albeit differently written. More of a one time read kinda person.(not ideal for academic life TT_TT) |
Keres47 chapter 15 . 4/3/2023 I’m pretty sure Molly disintegrated Bellatrix |
Keres47 chapter 13 . 4/3/2023 I disagree with Harry, or the author. I don’t think the wizardry world would survive a all out war with non-magical unless they somehow combine all wizards and develop armor and weapons far more powerful than what they had. Maybe in a assassin type attacks or blitzkrieg but an all out attack with just fire power, non-magical would win. Granted we may have to sacrifice a few non-magical in the process |
MoinLeute chapter 1 . 3/30/2023 the Ancient one (movie) is somewhere in the 700 years old... thats not super old. |
nephilim015 chapter 15 . 3/30/2023 Love the story but update when? Hope you will still continue this story, its really good! |