Reviews for The Eye of the Phoenix (Original)
Bronze chapter 2 . 8/14
Just as good as the first time I read it. Now if I'm right this next chapter is where I lost this story. I remember part of it but not the ending. Hopefully I can get to the fourth chapter now.
Bronze chapter 1 . 8/14
GOD knows and he ain't telling how many times I've started reading this! I get a few chapters in then lose it and forget I ever started it. Maybe this time I'll actually get to finish it. I've enjoyed the first chapter everytime I've read it and can't wait for Fury and SHEILD to attempt to tell Harry what he can or can't do. Really, I mean how could someone supposedly so smart think he or the organization he heads can tell a being of that immense power what they can or cannot do? Think of it as telling a bullet it can't kill you just because you say so! Is someone perhaps spiking his cigars with something strange? I know this is fan fiction, but he was never this dumb in the comics I use to read and collect! I truly hope that if Harry meets Captain America Steve isn't portrayed as he usually in in fan fiction stories.
yudhazebba chapter 15 . 6/23
SunPho3n1x chapter 15 . 6/12
I really enjoyed this story. I’m sorry that you feel that you have outgrown it as a writer. I wish you the best on the rewrite. Thank you for writing this!
realfan16 chapter 15 . 5/17
This was good. tho i was more drawn in by the idea of Harry going all Fire Hulk on us. Always on the verge of impotent rage or overwhelming joy. scaring everyone besides Teddy by his 'lack' of control. Well it was still good. Loved how the events are spread out and not constantly in Harry's POV. Overall good job i say...the rewrite...I'll see if i can bear re reading the same plot albeit differently written. More of a one time read kinda person.(not ideal for academic life TT_TT)
Keres47 chapter 15 . 4/3
I’m pretty sure Molly disintegrated Bellatrix
Keres47 chapter 13 . 4/3
I disagree with Harry, or the author. I don’t think the wizardry world would survive a all out war with non-magical unless they somehow combine all wizards and develop armor and weapons far more powerful than what they had. Maybe in a assassin type attacks or blitzkrieg but an all out attack with just fire power, non-magical would win. Granted we may have to sacrifice a few non-magical in the process
MoinLeute chapter 1 . 3/30
the Ancient one (movie) is somewhere in the 700 years old... thats not super old.
nephilim015 chapter 15 . 3/30
Love the story but update when? Hope you will still continue this story, its really good!
jimmy.oz chapter 15 . 3/11
I will read the rewrite but i liked how this story was going as well so hopefully you complete the rewrite at least. keep up the good work.
jimmy.oz chapter 1 . 3/11
I know your rewriting this one but i will still look at this while i am at but the first chapter did make things seem very interesting so hope the rewrite gets completed. i put it in the following area to wait for more chapters.
Anyanwu chapter 15 . 3/6
I'm kind of sad you're rewriting this, i enjoyed the direction of your story even if you don't. Adding Andromeda is a big change and i'm not entirely sure what you've planned though i sort of se why you've chosen to keep her. I hope i'll enjoy the rewrite too
OoOXylionOoO chapter 14 . 2/26
Thanks for the chapter.
OoOXylionOoO chapter 13 . 2/26
Ok. That was a twist :)
OoOXylionOoO chapter 8 . 2/26
Very very nice! This was an awesome chapter.
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