Reviews for Harry Potter The Girl Who Lived
Guest chapter 1 . 4/11
Why would you ruin a story by turning the main character into a badly written original character? Isn't a normal Mary Sue not annoying enough for you?
Sakura Lisel chapter 15 . 10/30/2020
The hey you ne
Little Ms. Pumpkin chapter 19 . 2/9/2020
complete already?!
ar111 chapter 15 . 9/5/2019
s pretty good so far.
a fairly fun story to read
Jan-AQ chapter 15 . 9/5/2019
This chapter is messed up and unreadable.
tristanrayne chapter 18 . 8/14/2019
Are you changing Ravenclaw’s riddles to just a password?
tristanrayne chapter 16 . 8/14/2019
Chapters 14 and 15 have some in needed input that I imagine wasn’t your doing.
loldelegate chapter 19 . 7/14/2019
Thanks for story! Please repair chapter 14 and 15, and in chaper 18 - in canon you have to answer a riddle to bronze eagle on door, to get inside rawenclaw's dorms.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2019
Wow. You’ve managed to combine a cannon character with the ever hated Mary Sue—a skanky one at that. That takes talent. Though, I wouldn’t brag about this newfound ‘talent’ if I were you.
Evesgreenleaf chapter 14 . 7/13/2019
Needs to be fixed
The Selvage Fairy chapter 14 . 7/12/2019
Nice story so far. You have a formatting problem in chapters 14 and 15.