Reviews for Compass of thy Soul
Sands Buisle chapter 13 . 1/15
This has been a great story. You've had me hooked pretty much the entire time!
Everyone is afraid of Mito.
b4tling chapter 2 . 10/12/2024
I wonder if theyll actually end up marrying or Madara may call it off once he meets his canon lover. Because he treats her more like a little sister, mainly because shes closer to Izuna's age. But who knows, maybe it'll just take time for it to get to that stage of their relationship considering theyre still young.
inquisitorbella chapter 13 . 9/28/2024
not the foreshadowing
inquisitorbella chapter 13 . 9/28/2024
i am seeing hints of Bondage!Izuna with that dress better comment. maybe the figure of izuna was always meant to be a bit of an icon
inquisitorbella chapter 9 . 9/28/2024
dear fellow reader, see how kita wants to ASK izuna before forking him over. like the reread is hitting! i didnt notice the parallels that come about later when they negotiate tobirama's transfer (hashirama just agreeing before even consulting)
inquisitorbella chapter 1 . 9/27/2024
excellent introductory chapter. really gives us a taste of kita's chatacter. the joys of a 3rd (4th?) reread
inquisitorbella chapter 1 . 9/27/2024
whoever said this was a bland rip off of DOS (big shikako head here as well as kita stan) lets fight irl. dm me
Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2024
This was a bland ripoff of Dreaming of Sunshine, not to mention negligent of established lore so that you could shit out an Uchiha powerwank. Fucking terrible.
FuckYeahShikaku chapter 3 . 9/14/2024
back again, ugh naginata is such a good weapon choice. shes so badass hhh
TheChronicleLover chapter 3 . 7/17/2024
One: bag if holding/like you said Merry Poppins bag. Ingenious!
Two: I just know that Madara followed the feel of her chakra when he slept walked. He has said before that it is very soothing and it totally would make sense that in his heightened emotional state that he just unconsciously followed something he knew would make him calmer.
Atomic Morning chapter 1 . 2/7/2024
Why do you have "no concrit" in your bio? Do you actually not want readers to share their thoughts?

Fine by me, I suppose. I'll still give this a shot.
Guest chapter 13 . 1/27/2024
OH THAT'S A GREAT EXPLANATION FOR WHY THE NAME DIED OUT IN CANON

Only the shinobi get to assume the "Senju" title, which makes sense considering what you established in an earlier chapter. All "Senju" are shinobi

Great worldbuilding
Guest chapter 12 . 1/27/2024
I'm just glad you didn't give anyone Kamui. My fucking god, that technique is way too busted. It gives you all the defensive capabilities of the preta path, but without the weaknesses, as Kamui can also nullify senjutsu and physical attacks. On top of that, it makes you completely intangible, gives you access to your own personal *inescapable* pocket dimension that you can freely suck others into (and store shit!), lets you enhance your own attacks by applying Kamui's warping effect, and to top it all off, it lets you *teleport*. It counters Susanoo by letting you pass through it, it counters Tsukuyomi by letting you teleport your body out of it, and it counters Amaterasu by letting you warp the flames away. It counters the Eight Gates with its intangibility. It counters the Rasenshuriken with its intangibility. It counters (insert anything here) with its intangibility/teleportation.

Spacetime ninjutsu is a hard counter for a lot of abilities in the show. Mangekyo Sharingan can hard counter a lot of abilities in the show. Kamui is a mangekyo Sharingan spacetime jutsu. It is both the best defensive technique and the best offensive technique in the series. Wtf was Kishi thinking when he came up with it? No wonder it had to be split into two eyes. It took Naruto, Kakashi, Guy, and Bee working together just to crack Tobi's mask, and even then, they were only able to do it bc Kakashi *also* had a Kamui. Can you fucking imagine if *Madara* had Kamui as his Mangekyo abilities? Jesus Christ, man.

Sorry for the ramble lol. I was just super worried that you would give the MC Kamui bc Obito is Madara's (and by extension Kita's) direct descendant. Glad you didn't, though. Kamui's a little too busted.
Guest chapter 10 . 1/27/2024
Actually, the Jinchuuriki of the Two-Tails can make blue fire.
Guest chapter 9 . 1/27/2024
Oh goddamn it, she knows the story?!
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