Reviews for Surprises
NerdsRule chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Candyland this was a-freakin mazing this is one of the greatest stories ever written you rock :)
SomeDamn Author chapter 1 . 12/13/2012

Ususally I'd criticise Fics like these for being unoriginal. .. but .. you blew me away !

I enjoyed it !
sheepeater chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
This was oustanding! You displayed the scene perfectly, and your characterization was kept spot on. Definitely one of the best DBZ fics I've come across. Well done.

graceysnit chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
i love u
zatarra chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Cool i hope you write more
NANLIT chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
Good oneshot on Videl's thoughts during the tournament. You could have expanded it to the rest of the Buu saga and all the surprises and bonding she shared with Gohan's group at the Lookout, but it was still good.
ElricKeyblade chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
Wow, this is a very good look into Videl's side of things during the World Tournament- well done, yo! bd
Esquimaux chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
wholly crow! you did that by memory? wow! it was great! thanks so much for posting it all!

Demonkid chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
very well done.
KageOkami-Kogo chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
Omigosh! I must have more! Give me more! Write a sequel :D please please?
Kitten Kisses chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
This was a pretty good story, following the plot. You see a lot about what Videl is thinking, which is cool, since, unfortunately, while watching the show you can't do much but just guess. :D
Toadzg1 chapter 1 . 8/27/2006
Cute one shot!
the grey mage chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
awesome. every videl fan needs to read this. though you could have added the afterlife parts.
Winter Bean chapter 1 . 6/20/2006
the dialogue aactually was pretty acurate please write more

TheRomanticNerd chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
This was very good, I had to stay up till 12:37 AM to finish this but I loved it A LOT! IT WAS AWESOME.

I just missed the japanese ending: "Please, survive this, because when you come back, I want to date you and stuff" Isn't this a 100 times more romantic and nice and everything? :-P

Anyway, the whole idea was awesome, the whole writing was awesome, and the whole fic was FUCKING AWESOME!

U do really kick ass with your oneshots!

See ya!

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