Reviews for A Dovahkiin Spreads His Wings
JesusFeet chapter 20 . 3h
Awesome chapter! An isn’t Enzo the name of the Ferrari guy?
lalalamb chapter 20 . 3h
Wow what a mess! What's going to happen to the crown, Joffrey and tommen is dead. Myrcella fled away willingly. There's Renly I suppose.
Zompusbite chapter 20 . 8h
VERY GREAT CHAPTER Pal. The tension was so high my heart kept beating furiously til the end. So good. Jon avenged his brother and stepmother, slapped some sense into Sansa (not sure it worked seeing her reaction to Joffrey's death...) and is in route to find Arya. With Seranna keeping eyes on SansaMyrcella,; Jory (and hopefully Vayon) doing the same with the household; and Ned already on board the ship(s), their escape is in good way of succed. Hope that Jeine Poole won't be left behind. Thank you again and see you soon.
Blaze1992 chapter 20 . 20h
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So much FUBAR in one event, I think you both one upped the shock factor and the death toll than the cannon event did.
Rhett1980 chapter 20 . 21h
Isn't Enzo from Assassin's Creed? But anyway! Great chapter! For once the Starks survive...hopefully! Ned is not dim but lets his honour get the better of him.
Dovahwolf13 chapter 20 . 22h
It not assassins creed I was reading his name as ezio and I don’t know why
DarkFusion chapter 20 . 7/2
Okay, I meant to review each chapter but damn it you're story is so good I had to do a marathon read. It's interesting to see just how much things are changing with Jon being more centrally involved in the plot and his experiences in Skyrim making him an effective hero in Westeros where the only ones who can be considered heroes can at best only break even. I'm really liking the Jon/Serana crossover pairing, again you've given them great chemistry. I like how you're giving side characters like Myrcella and Tommen (press all the Fs to pay respects) more character than they had in either canon. Last but not least this is also pretty cathartic seeing the completely irredeemable like Joffrey and The Mountain getting their just deserts, plus seeing the Lannister's a-hole guards get slaughtered when our Elder Scrolls cast decide to stop holding back (an example of Mugging the Monster at its finest XD). Also I'm enjoying the seeds of future plot developments you're putting in and has me wondering what could happen next. Like will anyone else be joining Jon's evacuation to Skyrim (the only one I can think of who might is Ser Barristan with Myrcella in the party)? If they make it to Skyrim how much of a culture shock are all the Westeros natives in for? How much is Cersei going to freak when she finds out she's down to one kid, and that kid is an ocean length way? How will Jon and Daenarys meet and what will their relationship be like given the former is going to be approaching her as kin from the get go? Will Jon being the Dragonborn have any effect on those dragon eggs? Finally, just how much of a threat will the White Walkers be given Jon has encountered similar creatures in Skyrim in the tombs? I look forward to the next chapter and hope to read it soon.
Lord of Fleas chapter 20 . 7/2
Chapter 19:
Jon: Okay, nothing bad yet, feels like anything could happen, but I'm confident that with a just a little time i can definitely fix this!

Chapter 20:
Jon: EVERYONE IS DEAD!

Good stuff, as always, though i felt Joffrey dying was a bit rushed. Glad to see Sandor has his priorities straight.
NB132 chapter 20 . 7/1
Well fuck me this was a whirlwind, I loved it so much. I do wonder what the plan is after they make it out of the city, I'd recommend setting Durnehviir on them but I don't think you need advice. Hope you write more
DarkFusion chapter 11 . 7/1
Well at least Arya gets to keep her wolf, and we at least got to see everyone's most hated character get humiliated worse. On another note it is interesting to see Jon's interaction with the Hound, kind of has me wondering if between him and Arya Jon's going to start building up a "screw this, I'm going to Skyrim" group among the GoT cast. Now on to the next chapter...
DarkFusion chapter 9 . 7/1
An interesting take on Jon's parentage, and in some ways a better version of what we got in the show. Now that Jon knows the truth, I wonder how that's going to affect things going forward, especially given if he's going to King's Landing he's probably going to find out the King Bob has put a hit out on his remaining blood relative which should be interesting to see how he takes that. Anyway on to the next chapter...
DarkFusion chapter 8 . 7/1
So Bran doesn't get "the push" and with that there goes one big motivating factor in Stark/Lannister antagonism. On the other hand I could still see Cersei sending that assassin given her paranoia. Meanwhile things are going further south with Jon and Ned than where the king's party is going, which is also where Jon is finding himself being dragged to (a certain vampiress is not going to be happy XD). About the only way I can see him getting out of this is maybe pretend to be interested in opening up trade between Westeros and Skyrim but he has to go back to do that. Also, kudos to you for giving the Myrcella some character (with hints of some for Tommen to come); here's hoping she gets a role beyond either canon gave her. Now on to the next chapter...
DarkFusion chapter 6 . 7/1
Nice work on writing the family tension that inevitably would come the more Jon stays in Winterfell. Am curious how Jon's going to tolerate the royal family, and also how Enzo would interact with The Hound. Liking that you seem to be going for a Jon/Serana pairing, you've given them such good chemistry even with just the letters. Now moving on to the next chapter...
RohanVos chapter 20 . 7/1
Well that escalated quickly! I knew it was coming and you did not disappoint. It will be interesting to see Cersi's descent into madness proceed at a much accelerated pace. I am more intrigued by the prospect of what Tywinn's reaction will be, all male heirs slain, and a missing princess.
Guest chapter 20 . 7/1
Nicely done butterfly effect with all the chaos going on.
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