| Reviews for Quintessence |
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   Jack the Sparrow chapter 35 . 6/10 "Porn most foul" fucking shot me XD |
| ironhair chapter 49 . 6/8 A satisfying ending |
| ironhair chapter 36 . 6/8 Will yuki become sith? |
| ironhair chapter 35 . 6/8 Poor yuki |
| IronHair chapter 1 . 6/7 Rereading |
| ironhair chapter 18 . 6/8 Betrayal & lies? Or just delusions? |
| ironhair chapter 15 . 6/7 Where are the memories coming from? |
| ironhair chapter 14 . 6/7 I'm hetro, but love is love. Well written. |
| ironhair chapter 11 . 6/7 Finally, something "fair", even though I know the worm universe had very little of that |
| MrMoogle chapter 35 . 5/30 I mean, why does Taylor forgive Sarah so damn easily? Sure, helping Coil capture her, you can't blame Tattletale for that, but the reaching out to Alan Barnes would not have been a Coil move, that's pure Tattletale dickery. |
| Difdi chapter 44 . 5/24 Is the master cape in this story arc named Scylla or Hecate? You used Scylla in chapter 43, and switched to Hecate in the first half of chapter 44 without editing the prior chapter. And then switched back to Scylla in the second half of chapter 44. Also, a broken neck would not instantly shut down the swarm of monsters. The command and control systems for parahuman powers are in the brain, and they won't shut down until the brain dies - which would take at least a couple minutes if the power requires conscious thought, or up to five minutes if it merely requires brain activity. |
| Difdi chapter 41 . 5/24 Siberian ate Bieber? Wow. I guess even the S9 aren't completely bad... Well, Armsmaster was already the former Armsmaster - just Armmaster after Leviathan. Might have been funnier to dress Dinah up like Dark Helmet though... |
| Difdi chapter 36 . 5/23 Actually, both Taylor and Sarah aren't underage. Washington state age of consent is 16. Neither of them is jailbait. |
| Difdi chapter 22 . 5/23 In previous chapters, you called the scale used to measure parahuman healing the Stansfield-Manton scale. In this chapter, you changed the name to Manton-Andon. One of these has to be a typo. |
| Difdi chapter 13 . 5/23 By the by, speaking as a Seattle resident almost all my life, there is no Bayview hospital in Seattle. There is, however, a Harborview hospital. If you're getting the name from an RPG, it was likely done that way to prevent trademark law issues from using it in a commercial product, which wouldn't apply to free-to-read fanfiction. If trademarked business names were an issue in fanfiction, you'd be unable to safely mention Goodwill either. |