I feel like Yuki is gonna die for Taylor, which is sad

Ugh I know this isn’t gonna be sunshine and Rainbows, but I LOATH Coil, and cannot express enough that I hope this story gives him a Horrible, HORRIBLE, death

Fuck Mrs Militia oh my gosh noooooooooo

I'm impressed with your ability to lace the end of this chapter with onions, through the internet no less. Very impressive. It's certainly not me tearing up, though.

you keep spelling ad as add.

Niiice. I loved every moment of this story, despite the darkness of it. The ending was vastly different than I expected, but anyways.

Theogany, huh? Yet again, I find another story of an excellent author and don't immediately realize who it is. I recognized something about the writing though. I eagerly await the sequel, if it's not already posted.

Mmm. I get the feeling that was almost too clean...

Justin Bieber got eaten by the zebra striped cannibal of the S9. Best part of the fic. XD

Once more, you have perfectly portrayed human nature. I despise people that act like this broken husk of a man has, regardless of the reasoning.

You write well, good sir.

Ok, that last sentence actually gave me a chuckle. Like, yeah, it's smart to disable their transport, like crushing the motorblock or popping the tires. But no, Taylor decides to flip it upsode down. XD

This story is great. It's no happy go lucky goodie story, but it's well written, thought, and fleshed out.

You've written humans horribly accurately. Their unreasonableness and hatred toward things they do not understand completely. It's one of the many things I despise about our people, and you've written it with painful accuracy.

Also, of course she beat both Narwhal and Mouse. They were both blinded by their own hatred and rage, and Taylor is a space wizard with more guidance and power than any Sith, Jedi, or their forebearers ever wielded.

I had wondered if Yuki was going to be significant beyond helping T grow up. A well-written story without any extraneous parts and no plotholes that jumped out at me. I like it, A

Burn the world types are boring.

... That's one way to kill a snake. Drown it in lemmings.

And this Coil seals his fate... Hopefully. You keep on surprising me.