So far, so good. You have a 'good girl' who has had some 'very bad things' happen to her. She doesn't want to do more bad things, beyond the misplaced retribution she's already taken. I can definitely see how your warning against trafficking could come up, but, given her ability to completely remove herself from awareness, it seems unlikely that she'll be a victim. I hope.

Ok, thanks for the warning. I'll give it a shot.

Scary, scary stuff.

Wow, this is such an amazing story! It is so interesting in its scope and how it uses so many different genres/tropes of fanfic. I really enjoyed it! Thanks so much for writing and I hope you’re doing well :)

Not a fan of how things went since levi. She shoulda just exploded the air inside Alexandria's body or something. Get vengeance don't play to their plan ect. Hate seeing another railroading into wards olotline

kill them. if your going to be charged with the birdcage at least earn it.

fuck those prices of shit. the only one feeling guilt was probably militia. all those others at the prt were probably expecting another ward . forced compliance of not.

well nevermind.

and Taylor is captured by the PRT in the 1st chapter. guess this is a hero fic. ugh

I've enjoyed reading this so much!

I feel like Yuki is gonna die for Taylor, which is sad

Ugh I know this isn’t gonna be sunshine and Rainbows, but I LOATH Coil, and cannot express enough that I hope this story gives him a Horrible, HORRIBLE, death

Fuck Mrs Militia oh my gosh noooooooooo

I'm impressed with your ability to lace the end of this chapter with onions, through the internet no less. Very impressive. It's certainly not me tearing up, though.

you keep spelling ad as add.