|Reviews for A Life of Lies|
| serena23 chapter 57 . 3/22
Please update your story again soon!
| Mary777777 chapter 23 . 5/14/2017
Ugh, a Mary Sue warning would have been nice so that I didn't waste my time reading to this point...
| Makurayami Ookami chapter 1 . 4/22/2017
| dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 1/22/2017
Awesome chapter and plot and amazing idea
| veerle chapter 57 . 10/12/2016
very good story but is it going to be continued or completed?
I look forward to it
| Guest chapter 25 . 8/3/2016
There's two sure ways to ruin a fan fiction story:
1. Change an established character's name and personality so that the they're essentially an original character.
2. Brining in 'Mary Sues' or original characters mid way through the story.
We come here to read Harry Potter stories, not some random made-up character named Callen, a vapid bimbo named Elizabeth, or a brat named Jessica. Even more irritating is the fact that you've neglected to warn readers that your story has a Mary Sue/Marty Stu infestation. I wish I would have known this before I wasted my time.
You've been banished to my 'do not read list' due to your lack of honesty.
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/27/2016
Unlike the United States, where every dumb hick owns twenty guns, they're uncommon in suburban England. Even more uncommon is one being fired without peaking the neighbors interest.
Rednecks shooting at each other might be such common place in the States that nobody so much bats an eye at the sound of gunshot, but in England the police would be called. At the very least, someone would look out their window to see what's going on.
| Godogma chapter 6 . 6/16/2016
And on that note I'm done... best of luck with your writing but utterly unbelievable; I was giving this a shot but that pretty much killed it.
| gothangelp3 chapter 57 . 4/3/2016
OMG, pleaseeeeeee update this story! This is one of the best stories I have ever read and I soooo want to know how it ends! Please, please, please update!
| SortingHat chapter 8 . 1/23/2016
"That you are a Gary Stu!" continued Dumb Old Door. 'A WHAT!?' shrieked Harry? 'According to the online Mary Sue Test you met the qualifications of the male version of the annoying yet liked Mary Sue which the female version only fan girls with no lives or no brains drool over!' Mr Dumbledore exclaimed.
'In fact you could sway any hogwarts girl to your favor with just your looks and say the right things or be as sassy as possible to intimidate women to think your tough where as Mary Sue women will do the same to guys with low self esteem such as yourself and to a lesser degree Lupin.
You could even make Professor Snape's life more hell yet the school would still love you if you play your cards right and there doesn't have to be much character development for this to take effect. In fact you could make an entire soap opera cry in your beer story that is a dime a dozen yet people flock to it who have no life and still live in mom's basement or mentally ill!' finished Dumbledore before taking another mind inducing lemon drop.
"The possibilities are all there and yours for the taking so choose wisely my golden boy" said the headmaster with much joy making Professor Snape flinch and feeling quit disgusted at the author as he quietly leaves the room before kamaphfan can give that Potter brat any sudden ideas.
| Sortinghat chapter 7 . 1/23/2016
This should be labeled AU...way AU since it's James Potter that was married to Lilly not Snape. Please be more clear my dear.
| Sortinghat chapter 6 . 1/23/2016
Sorry but Harry is Lilly and Jame's potter son. This is nonsense.
| Sortinghat chapter 5 . 1/22/2016
Tey should also question the fact as to how Vernon even has a gun as they are impossible to get unless your with a hunting club or range and even then you are not allowed to keep it at home I think.
England now borderlines communism though isn't quite there yet but they are heading the spy in your private life route and just because you have 'nothing ot hide' is no excuse for them to get away with it./
That's just indifference and lack of understanding of why we should have privacy laws.
| Sortinghat chapter 3 . 1/22/2016
I hope this isn't a mute Harry fic where he remains silent with only two words thru the whole fic but I'll still read it if it is because it's different then most fics that have him be mute.
I wish though authors would label it when they decide to have the main character be mute or not.
| Sortinghat chapter 1 . 1/22/2016
Will it ne as lame as the video game where every other treasure chest contains 'A wizard card!' or 'cauldron cake!' with a whole bunch of beans you don't know what to do with?