I found this story a couple days ago and got hooked.

Though I have to say the last dozen chapters just seem to be getting way too angsty for my tastes.

Thank you for sharing your work either way!

"What was he trying to craft?" that was top Hollywood level

A few spelling and grammar issues here and there but overall the first chapter was pretty interesting and I look forward to the next one.

This passage skillfully illustrates Jiro's growing realization of the difference between her approach and Shirou's, offering a glimpse into the level of strategy and focus required to excel at a professional level. It's a well executed moment of self-reflection, highlighting the intense competition and the importance of constantly adapting and learning in such high-stakes situations.

"Here go do a crime"

I guess the situation called for it? Now he will be hunted for his reality marble

i wonder who the archer for this possession will be, will it be EMIYA or will it be a poor excuse of Gilgamesh? We all know Gilgamesh cannot be altered, so the highest chance is a shadow version of him

I like the fact that you made shirou influence the guys there, deku in canon would have never plucked another's eye out

They are still trying to turn him into a "licensed" hero

Rin is escaping from all of this bullshit

Actually a befitting end of shirou vs rin, showing the upper level of his blue prints was abit too dangerous so rin probably decided to forfeit to make their lives easier

Just found this fanfic, the beginning is as usual, shirou joining the school because of his age, but one thing i find uncommon is this shirou actually read shigaraki and didnt summon a np to kill the guy like most fanfic depicting shirou, and it hooked me in, shirou by himself will be very self destructive but with Rin here, he will know of his own priority.

it's going to be a slugfest

Funny how jiro and team are out there, busting their asses trying to buy him time meanwhile Shirou is chilling instead. What was his plan anyways? Capturing toga did little to nothing

Makes no sense. Ragdoll's quirk has a range limit.
Now you telling us her quirk evolved and she can detect Shirou anywhere in Japan?