Reviews for Looking for the Aliens
i.m. nell chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
Adorably clever!
Eternal Density chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
fun little fic. I rather like the CO disintegrator line. great ending too.
locardxchange chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
very cute!
Su Freund chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
Very nicely done, and keeping more or less in line with show canon to boot! I always had this idea in my mind that Jack taught Sam about the beauty of the stars when all she saw was the science, and this is a wonderfully conceived and written extension of that notion.
Livi2Jack chapter 1 . 8/2/2007
I stumbled on this one thinking the exact same thing. Where are all the aliens? Not just the kind trying to kill us. Great answer Ted! LOL. I've had critter stories on the brain but this is better. Livi
ReggieRogue chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
lol weird, but cute
too tired to log in at 2 am chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
Cool. I like the idea of Jack knowing more than just the bare basics of astronomy and coming up with an idea like that. I also like how you included science and logic and a little romance into this. Well done!
Sci Fi Fan Gillian chapter 1 . 2/6/2004
That was awesome.
msa chapter 1 . 6/25/2003
I know you are looking for a 'well-rounded' critique, but when a story is this good, all we can do is say thanks!

Favorite lines: "Hey, Carter, building anything useful?" "It's a CO disintegrator, Sir." she replied. "You'll be gone in 30 seconds."
DNU1 chapter 1 . 5/23/2003
I can't believe no one else has review this!

My second fav. of yours. Especially the ending. We know better, don't we?