|Reviews for Death's Champion|
| Jessica Dallas chapter 11 . 6/10
I hope u will not abandon this, because this is seriously interesting story. But if u do thank you for writing a good story, i love the black family is almost together, the harmony sibling connection, also the coming alliances is really interesting.
| SnowUchiha chapter 1 . 5/7
Fuck ye ye sick egotistical nut job slob knobbing motherfucking wanker fucking buggering shitting arsehole bastard bloodclaat cocksucking minger
prick snatching twat
| bobel1990 chapter 1 . 4/30
the thing so wrong is just the Way his Parents act in the way they block the door for his Happines and scold him for choosing it over saving someone and then guilt trip and Manipulate him into what they want him to do.
its NOT his desicion his Parents did pull a Dumbl move on there own son that got Tortured for what years?
thats just Pure Evil
| ZeroExia chapter 9 . 3/23
I’ve read the first two checking the third now thank you
| ZeroExia chapter 6 . 3/23
Snaps gets what he deserves mostly love it, I know everyone either loves him or hate’s him but I’m lean towards the former more than the latter, I view him as a hateful man child that can’t let go of a childhood grudge after James potter died, I mean taking the grudge out on a child with no memories is pathetic and weak
| Bostonette chapter 1 . 3/3
No. Already the worst possible way to start a fic, and especially one with death supposedly helping him. “you have two options pick the one you want.” Oh wait, it’s a dipshit author writing it so therefore it doesn’t matter what he picks it’s going to be the “wrong” one decision because it’s Harry. AND you threw his parents in to guilt him. To hell with you and this “story”.
| C3nterF0ld chapter 11 . 2/22
God fuck do I love this. I sincerely hope you come back one day because I enjoy this a lot, I want to see Harry's reaction to fate hurting Beatrice so much. truly it will be a great moment
| C3nterF0ld chapter 10 . 2/22
gets to the ball? could this be a reference to Greek fates?
| C3nterF0ld chapter 9 . 2/22
oooh... Harry's not gonna be happy with this one.. oooooohohohooooooo fate done goofed it now..
| C3nterF0ld chapter 6 . 2/22
I want to let everyone know that I was listening to the song "Lucifers waltz" during the scene with Snape and it fit PERFECTLY. just wanted to share :3
| starie78 chapter 11 . 2/20
Great story. I loved how you dealt with Walburga. I'm hoping love's black orb means Harry will be paired with Beatrice.
I'm hoping you will continue this story when you have time.
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/20
This story is too good. Please update!
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/20
Two words, Simply Amazing!
I haven't read anything similar to this. Your writing and the plot are both unique.
Please update soon.
Keep up the good work!
| Kyria Greene chapter 11 . 12/24/2021
Interesting story! Wish there was more! So good!
| Katharina Weber chapter 1 . 12/7/2021
Very nicely done. Unusual, and like no other I read in the last twenty years. Interesting plot and I am curious how it will develop. Maybe you can get back to this story to finish it