| Reviews for The Second Chance War |
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   Birdly The Reaper Of Souls chapter 26 . 9/17/2024 The whole Boruto idea for black fox 2 Sorry not going to read that... Boruto is top garbage. .. and not as many will read it Good luck... because Boruto canon story is the worse shit ever writen... |
| Anon chapter 26 . 4/24/2024 Hopefully Dany is killed by War. |
| J chapter 25 . 4/3/2024 While this is a great concept, there are so many mistakes. Here's just a few: - The Red Priest with dark skin and markings is Moqorro, but you've called him High Priest Benerro. - Greatjon is Lord UMBER but you've called him Karstark, and it was Karstark that lost 2 sons to Jaime not Umber. - Trystane is the youngest son of House Martell not Quentyn. You've mixed the books and show which causes issues, and adds confusion. And don't get me started on all the spelling mistakes and grammar issues, misspelled names (it's Kevan not Kevin, Karstark not Karastark etc) repeated words and confusing sentences...It's incredibly difficult to read! |
| Lord Halcyon chapter 26 . 1/24/2024 Just finished reading this awesome story and I can't wait for more. |
| JoSamm chapter 26 . 12/5/2023 I loved the last chapter you uploaded. I hope you can upload more chapters soon. |
| IziahMikaelson34 chapter 4 . 11/13/2023 Bran Stark! the clutchiest clutch that ever clutched! Bran the Healer of Wounds |
| IziahMikaelson34 chapter 2 . 11/13/2023 i be so sick of mellisandre everything she tries to put the Old Gods down (in any fiction, asoiafGoT) like women if you don't wake up and breathe in the air of truth and circumstance |
| IziahMikaelson34 chapter 1 . 11/13/2023 i am SO AMPED FOR THIS STORY and havent even completed Chapter 1! LETS GOOOOOO |
| marisares76 chapter 26 . 10/11/2023 Well, where is the update? Another excellent story so keep going, yes please! |
| Eiji11 chapter 26 . 9/14/2023 please continue the fic! Its amazing! |
| Snowfall chapter 26 . 7/23/2023 Absolutely love this. I just reread the whole story and really enjoyed it. There’s some typos here and there but otherwise this is so well written. I love the plot and the children of the forest. I can’t wait to read more. I hope you’re having a good summer. ️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️️ |
| Anonymous post chapter 26 . 6/14/2023 LOVE this story. I just read the whole thing in like 2 days. So good. Thanks for writing this dude |
| Anon chapter 13 . 6/2/2023 Really love this story. But there are some inconsistencies. In the beginning of this story you said that there were a dozen children of the forest, now there are only 6. |
| Guest chapter 26 . 5/2/2023 Please update soon amazing story |
| Robbler chapter 24 . 3/21/2023 Jaime cut down Karstarks sons, not Greatjons. |