| Reviews for Achilles Heel |
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   Major Simi chapter 5 . 7/26/2022 An interesting story concept please continue |
| anten77 chapter 5 . 3/7/2021 A good read with a well thought plot looking forward to reading more |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/16/2020 Great story, hope next update is soon |
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/27/2020 This story is really good so far. The tiny, seemingly insignificant details stand out. |
| phineasn chapter 5 . 4/19/2020 Thanks! Really like the story and it’s been a while since last update! With Covid it’s really great to have something of this quality to read! |
| jamesdewolf chapter 5 . 4/15/2020 that was an excellent way of dealing with Seth and is liking how practical you are with the British military. |
| aflyingostrich chapter 5 . 4/15/2020 This is excellent so far, please keep up the good work! |
| Starlord Master chapter 5 . 4/15/2020 Keep writing. Good morning. |
| Starlord Master chapter 4 . 4/15/2020 Vian sure is thorough. |
| Starlord Master chapter 3 . 4/6/2020 More! |
| Starlord Master chapter 2 . 4/6/2020 Sounds like fun on a bomb. |
| Starlord Master chapter 1 . 4/6/2020 World War II was nasty. |
| Istariol chapter 3 . 3/17/2020 I have only one thing to criticise... WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?! I really like this story so far. Hope to see more soon! |
| john777 chapter 3 . 2/20/2020 interesting story, keep writing |
| jamesdewolf chapter 3 . 9/23/2019 loving so far can't wait for more keep it up you are doing well |