Reviews for Achilles Heel
Major Simi chapter 5 . 7/26/2022
An interesting story concept please continue
anten77 chapter 5 . 3/7/2021
A good read with a well thought plot looking forward to reading more
Guest chapter 5 . 7/16/2020
Great story, hope next update is soon
Guest chapter 5 . 4/27/2020
This story is really good so far. The tiny, seemingly insignificant details stand out.
phineasn chapter 5 . 4/19/2020
Thanks! Really like the story and it’s been a while since last update! With Covid it’s really great to have something of this quality to read!
jamesdewolf chapter 5 . 4/15/2020
that was an excellent way of dealing with Seth and is liking how practical you are with the British military.
aflyingostrich chapter 5 . 4/15/2020
This is excellent so far, please keep up the good work!
Starlord Master chapter 5 . 4/15/2020
Keep writing.

Good morning.
Starlord Master chapter 4 . 4/15/2020
Vian sure is thorough.
Starlord Master chapter 3 . 4/6/2020
Starlord Master chapter 2 . 4/6/2020
Sounds like fun on a bomb.
Starlord Master chapter 1 . 4/6/2020
World War II was nasty.
Istariol chapter 3 . 3/17/2020
I have only one thing to criticise...


I really like this story so far. Hope to see more soon!
john777 chapter 3 . 2/20/2020
interesting story, keep writing
jamesdewolf chapter 3 . 9/23/2019
loving so far can't wait for more keep it up you are doing well
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