Reviews for Percy Jackson and the Lost God
Guest chapter 3 . 10/4/2019
This is good !
I guess what tricks will get percy.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/4/2019
Welp.
This is good and i dont expect that.
Keep like this.

The only thing what its getting me worried is Percabeth...
Looks like that wont be here.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2019
Dude, what the hell?
I hope this isnt a "Betrayed percy" fanfic.
OverLordRevan chapter 10 . 10/6/2019
my only problem with this story is that it feels like you really cut percy's balls off. now he can't do anything with out adamos.
ArthurShade chapter 10 . 10/4/2019
Nice chapter
Ice 88 chapter 8 . 10/4/2019
Great chapter, love tfs references.
S1kono chapter 9 . 9/28/2019
You repost a chapter
Matt chapter 9 . 9/25/2019
I loved that song too.
Sleepysaurus Rex chapter 9 . 9/25/2019
With the 'Make Percy OP' thing, do a slow burn. Making a character instantly OP takes value away from the story. Aside from that advice, great stuff! I can't see any spelling/grammar mistakes, and the story is taking shape very well. Also, I would like more pop-culture references please!
ArthurShade chapter 9 . 9/24/2019
Nice chapter looking forward to the next one
ArthurShade chapter 8 . 9/23/2019
Excellent story looking forward to the next chapter
Guest chapter 8 . 9/20/2019
I'm gonna break you like a kit-kat bar. One of the Best DBZA-quotes ;).
Also interesting story. Keep up the good work

Sincerely ApollosCreed8
ApollosCreed8 chapter 8 . 9/21/2019
Nice story keep it up. Very interesting an original concept. Also don't be so hard on yourself. This story is one of the best I'm currently reading ;).
By the way the Goku Kit-Kat bar refrence was very funny and unexpected.
I wish you the best ;)
HabeFan chapter 8 . 9/18/2019
this is good and creative story. I like an au percy because canon sometimes gets boring and underdeveloped power wise. there is so much unexplored things in PJO. I like everything except Oc is the GOD, since I am Christian. But don't let me discourage you. I want to see your take on things.
Sleepysaurus Rex chapter 8 . 9/17/2019
The reference to the Batman Cartoon put a smile on my face. Are you going to add effects to the fights in the same way? :D
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