Reviews for Chaotic Good |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ok i'm fine witg the self insert so far but if ainz is removed from the story then fuck this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Here's hoping that you might one day continue this |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love the NPC view segments, it builds them up and lets us see the view from the ground, so rare a privilege as that is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Easily the most in-depth fan fic I've read, the plot, progression, and character interactions are far beyond what should be found in a fan fic. I applaud you for writing this and for sharing it with me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I lost count of how many times I reread this one |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is mister one of the best introdıction ı ever seen |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh.. pretty sure he's going to come to regret making noa so clumsy and useless once she starts falling over her own feet and missing her heals, and ending up healing the enemy and giving constant friendly fire. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He might come to regret that backstory he gave Archer, once zelretch and other fate characters start to fuck with him, I dunno. Then he might also regret not getting more of that power he passed up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why was he punished for defending himself from pkers? And if pking makes you lose levels, why do others do it? And if calling out spells is to avoid friendly fire, why did he keep calling out and letting the enemies know what he was doing? Fun story, but some irritating little things. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rereading this with a Path of Exile background now this is way more enjoyable. Mirrors lol. Still haven't had one drop. One in two thousand hours, im hslf way there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() re-read complete, thanks for the story. with all the setup it is sad to see that we didn't get much payoff, one can only hope that you will continue one day. i recommend using google docs or something like that, it will prevent the loss of chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just this, just this backstory for the actual story could function as a full on story. I'm going to be honest it's a hidden gem, every interaction, all the emotions and interactions are great. I just wish for a last meeting between him and the devs, after all he's "old" and will soon disappear from their world. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bro the flavor text on the world item crafted is amazing. He was too capable tgat he destroyed the worlds along with the darkness. The mc is a god at the point and he keeps getting strongs, i love it! He has no limits and now he can mass produce custom world item. With the staff he made, A single spell from it with all the effects should be capable of wiping out a country or more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why doesn’t he put something like “soul bound to the ancient one” in the flavor text instead of LV requirement |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now I understand why rubedo calls hum a mad man lol, casually buffing your enemies cause you’re bored lol. Iirc the timeline is 400-300yrs after the first player came and that means there should be stories about the 8 greed kings and the 6 gods and also evil eye should still be in the lost country, while still widely known as Landfall, right? |