If you want to fuck dorne up all you gotta do is create a blockade on land near the start of their desert shit hole and don't follow them when they start using guerilla tactics and set up a blockade on the sea while also securing a deal of sorts with some of those pirates or the bravos bank in essos to prevent the arrival of aid from prince dorans wife in norvos and whoever else they are allied with... With that all you gotta do then is wait them out and don't stop waiting until they either starve to death or bend the knee while making a oath of sorts that says they will never rise in rebellion ever again or something which is just another method of control I mean no one in westeros ever keeps the oaths they make but they love to call each other out on those things which is funny considering everyone is fucking hypocrite lol

Honestly this was a really fun read. I like how you portray the fact that no matter how competent someone is it Dosent make everything smooth sailings. If this story is discontinued I’d honestly be pretty saddened by it but I’d love to see more

Really great story, I want to see where else you take it.

ch 8 author made a mess of things so he can make it right with cannons, this is boring

ch 3 mc is going to use cannons in game of thrones... lame

ch 2 BS author wants things one way but instead of admiting things wants to give excuses
need stark and his wife are trouble makers but in your fanfic you just want him dead so you lead things the way you wanted, but you want to give a lame excuse like he was never going to survive this hahaha BS over 9000

This chapter reads like it was written by a teenager

Please continue.

то есть пушки лучше мечей в плане безопасности лучше оставить мечи а эсос не отдаст свой бомбы не кому это же их изобретение это тоже самое если сша от даст все ядерное оружие другой стране ты чё дурак

человек в роде метью должен понимать что все его планы полный бред всё что нужно сделать это прожить как можно дольше а не думать о правах людей и порохе

What a shame, I kinda liked it for a while but now I'm out.
Good luck at the rest of your story.

I also thought of a marriage alliance between Daenerys and Joffrey but that wouldn’t work considering the circumstances.

I was gonna say Jon snow considering he’s the true heir to the throne

Amazing ending

Update plz