Loved this concept! But it's really quite confusing who's POV it is most of the time and keeping track of the present and flashbacks. Great job weaving it all together tho.

Everything that you are, all the disgusting fucking freaks like you, all of you deserve nothing but suffering for as long as you are allowed to be alive.

You are not a human being. No one should ever feel anything for you but the utmost contempt and disgust at your continued existence.

Your entire bloodline should be barred from ever creating something else for fear that some profane abomination like you might spawn from their corrupted genes again.

Your worthless parents should be jailed for allowing something like you to exist and they should forever be shamed so that nothing else like you could ever hope to be birthed again.

I just realized since the Konoha crush didn't happen like in canon (no Suna) then Gaara is likely still a murder hobo. I know the finals happens since Naruto vs Neji was mentioned but nothing else was shown so not too sure

First time I've seen a time travel story where they basically get Wizard of Oz'd into the past. Pretty interesting concept

sakura's way too OC in your stories if you that much of a problem with how she's written by kishimoto then kill her off and add a OC because it makes no sense really

Kiba vs Naruto was indoors, not in the stadium full of hundreds of people.

i wanted to stated that naruto cant have any scar because of kurama's healing factor, he doesnt even have any scar when sasuke made a hole in his chest. So i think if you wnted to fix somthing from this fic ,that would be one of the plothole that should be fix

This is a good concept for a story, it’s just all over the place. First things first I doubt the hokage (who was it here during the preliminary round) wouldn’t talk to them first before all the blood test and stuff. It just keeps going back and first from younger to older, don’t get me wrong it kinda makes sense but you also added the kids as well so it’s like 8-10 different perspectives you add in. I’m probably just dumb so️

It was too much to hope everything would go perfectly. With all the good that happened, it was a gut punch for Tsunade to die like she did. At least Naruto and Hinata get to keep the memories of before and after.

Still, at least Tsunade's death was properly impactful. So good job there.

ok that vibe from young naruto is really sweet

man please just please proof read stuff before posting it

To the very end you were brain dead. STOP SWITCHING TENSES, YOU MONKEY.

Are you retarded, or what?

Imagine being so brain dead you switch tenses back and forth.

This is a clusterfuck of POVs. No one wants to read about an eight year old Boruto, dude. Legit, no fucks are given about him.