Reviews for Yesterday Morning
nightwind83 chapter 17 . 1/25/2020
nice chapter and glad your not going with the talk no jutsu saves all. I dont see obito being redeem. he had to see what his plan down and get to ripped from his control before he makes a change after all
MOR the Divine Being chapter 1 . 1/22/2020
okay I like the premise, just one question, why in the world must it be in the middle of the arena instead of any other location, just tell me pls
Everlasting Imperius chapter 1 . 1/20/2020
You really want to work on your dialogues, they feel very static and just give a very awful experience having to chew through them.
TheWateringWizard chapter 16 . 1/19/2020
Oh my god, Jiraiya survives ! But which Pein came to the Hyuga compound ? I fear it’s the one who drains the soul
Guest chapter 16 . 1/19/2020
Interesting
jenuzumaki chapter 16 . 1/18/2020
I'm crying. Jiraiya survived. This is the best outcome yet of their time travel accident.
Frwt chapter 16 . 1/18/2020
so... does that mean, jiraya will live in the future?
maxridelover chapter 16 . 1/18/2020
i really enjoyed this chapter a lot!
Bloody Rogue dragon deity king chapter 16 . 1/18/2020
Oh man, cliffhanger
Dragon Man 180 chapter 16 . 1/18/2020
I honestly want to not see the future bits because they are SPOILERS for changes that are in progress in the past!

So if all six paths and Konan are fighting Jiraiya... who is attacking the Hyuuga to get Hinata?
NaruHinaF chapter 16 . 1/18/2020
Wow Pain fights them in the Part I timeline? That's really cool! I'm guessing Jiraiya will be alive in Boruto's era?!
Xana100 chapter 1 . 1/18/2020
You sneak. That bit near the end made me genuinely smile.
Darth Tenibris2 chapter 16 . 1/18/2020
You always manage to get me hyped as shit reading your fantastic stuff! I'm always baited and ready for the next update.

You are honestly one of the best writers on this site!
Rose Tiger chapter 16 . 1/18/2020
Uh oh
mateususantosu chapter 5 . 1/11/2020
jeez, Boruto is an ass even in fanfiction.
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