|Reviews for Chosen of the Omnipotents-Magi Mutant Hero|
| Dayside chapter 3 . 7/22
This is beyond fucking stupid. I'm out.
| PrinceWeirdo chapter 8 . 7/4
There is so much cringe and shit around here... Urrgghh. I'm gonna stop here for a while mate... I promise to come back to read it again later...
| PrinceWeirdo chapter 7 . 7/4
Wait, didn't he said to bring his daughter? And he always leave Hagrid to take care of his kids? What's the point of house elves then? Why did he treat Hagrid like baby sitter instead of his friend? You know, he always say it out loud to people that Hagrid is his friend... And now he treat him as glorified baby sitter... At least bring him to asgard fucker... And ancient one, as in Steven strange? Did Steven strange call himself ancient one? And he's a seidr? When did that happen? And why Di he need Odin to acknowledge him? Not like he need to, he's not asgardian right? There's alot of confusion c here buddy and I didn't mention all...
| PrinceWeirdo chapter 6 . 7/4
I skip most, sorry.
| PrinceWeirdo chapter 5 . 7/4
Well... Hurm.. Nah.. I wouldn't comment the plot hole... Let just read my brain...
| PrinceWeirdo chapter 4 . 7/3
He forgot Hagrid muggle money! But it's okay, now he could just take over all the magical industries and ask elves to operate them all.. No more risk of leaking all the magical recipe for drinks and foods because no more wizards and witch around apart from them...
Also why didn't he just cut himself with his wolverine claw? Dumb dumb...
| PrinceWeirdo chapter 3 . 7/3
So, olivander is not human wizard but some kind of hybrid like Hagrid? Also the guy still open a store after more than decades of no new wizard? Why? With no more wizard as customer, why did he still there unless plot armor! The gringotts is the same, why open when you are the only being that has magic in Scotland? I would just go to France and focus on veela, vampire and all those hybrid intelligent being instead of staying in London... What a foolish goblin, or is it another plot armor? And where is the 3 item that need to be fused with him? And the vault, is there any old books and ritual and all those stuff apart from galleon?..
| PrinceWeirdo chapter 2 . 7/3
Damn, the punishment is harsh for those stupid wizard bigots... No magic... So that's mean all the wizard and witch family heritage is free for picking for Harry? Or did lady Magic already arrange it and take all the heritage and knowledge into Hogwarts itself? Also the gringotts? Is it his properties also? I want to say more, but I forgot what to say.. So, badabing bada boom! Lick my balls.
| frankiebayer2002 chapter 2 . 7/2
This is great
| fluitt.charles10 chapter 7 . 6/19
it says steven but up abit it says she
| Obstrocity chapter 6 . 3/31
Aight I'm out. You really just had Jean tell him to watch his mouth and he just listened to her and called her mom? Fuck that jazz
| Obstrocity chapter 5 . 3/31
Who the fuck is Cassie?
| Guest chapter 21 . 3/23
Most black men running out on their kids? Jesus... smh
| Lordlexx chapter 2 . 3/13
I was interested in this but then you made Jean Grey his "mother" and not his lover. That kinda sucks to me as there really aren't enough stories that pair those two.
But then you did one of the Big Taboos of Harry Potter stories and changed his name to Hadrian... Harry isn't a short form of Hadrian. Beyond that, its just really stupid to change his name.
| Malkeus chapter 22 . 2/23
I'm sorry, did Elektra just murder stick n then immediately join the team with no one even remarking on sticks death? I may have missed something, but if not, your plot is fucking retarded. There seems to be some content missing to make this make sense.