loved it. cried a lot. thank you for making this happen. this is an amazing story and i learnt a lot about did from this fic. you have a talent.

I've heard of DID before and I've always been curious about it and I thought that this story might help me understand it a little bit more. When I read the plot I was immediately intrigued but as I continued to read I instantly became hooked by this. I admire the way you wrote Bella and her alters especially how you highlighted the way they differ from one another because it is fascinating to read it from a reader's perspective. I love how each alter has a significant role to play in protecting Bella in every way possible, even though sometimes it's to a fault, but it's refreshing to see how realizations were made later in the story that made Rosalie realize that protecting Bella is important but also letting her live her life is important as well.

I loved the development of Edward's relationship with Bella and her alters and how it seemed like it was all meant to be, like Edward is truly the only one who can see Bella for who she is and truly love her for it. One thing that kind of shocked me (but I kinda see it coming as well) in the most pleasing way is how Edward and Rosalie's relationship developed because they went from absolutely despising each other to accepting their deepest desires and falling in love with other. I think it was important for Edward to create a healthy relationship with Bella's alters because they are also a part of her being.

Their relationship was definitely not an easy ride and there were moments that almost everything is going to fall part. What they had was imperfect, but their situation was something that requires them to mold it into something that would work for them and make it uniquely theirs— and it was beautiful to witness their relationship grow. The ending with Bella, Rosalie, Alice, Bree, and Tanya finally living harmoniously together is such a beautiful turn for Bella's life. This story is unique and insightful, and it definitely made me open my mind about DID and I'm forever grateful for it. Kudos to you for writing such a powerful story! Sending my love xo

She is like ten parties in a minute.

I very much enjoyed this story. I've always been fascinated by DID, the first one I remember reading was "When Rabbit Howls" by Trudy something or other. The author did a series of interviews connected with the book too. Absolutely harrowing. You had such an interesting idea, that someone (who looks like Rob, no less!) falls in love with the "root" person but comes to love all the alters as well. Another intriguing thing is that Bella chose to let Rosalie hold the detailed experiences of what actually happened to them, saving Bella from having to relive them too closely. The evolution of Edward was quite interesting, too.

I especially had to comment on the delightful dialog in the last few chapters. Fun and snappy, but also marvelously insightful.

Great job - thanks for sharing your story.

Thank you for your story. I thought it was very informative about DID. I enjoyed watching Bella and all her alters fall in love with Edward. I really wanted Edward and Rosalie to make it and was kind of sad that Bella came back in the end. Once she was back she was a totally different person and I didn't miss Rosalie as much.

This was one of the best story about mental illness I ever read. It was funny and sad, I had to cry sometimes, it was a great ride! but I am a little bit sad, that al the alters are "gone". Every one of them was described so great. Please go on and write another good story. (sorry for my bad english, I am an Austrian girl :)) greetings, bellaisa91

That was a wild ride.

Hmmm glad she told him

Whoa

That was funny with Charlie, I hope he understands Edward's plan. He was very clever with Rosalie

Loved the story. Thank you.

Amazing

you know this story is so freaking amazing have not been able to put it down since starting about 2 hours ago. also I completely understand the whole cheating situation. I dont usually like them cheating unless for a bigger plot and this definitely seems understandable as to why you would put this in.

I am in awe at your talent. How beautifully you expressed each and every personality is praiseworthy. In truth, we all have these certain sides of ours that we use at times to cope with different situations. Bella's disorder made us realize how these personalities are an integral part of us in order to make us grow. You wrote about something so beautiful that it was hard for me to put it down until I've finally finished it- though this moment is bittersweet, but these two deserved a happy ending! I just love how Edward embraced her and how they finally have it all. Truly amazing. I just can't thank you enough for sharing this ️

Hello :) I just read the Spanish translation of your story and wanted to say thank you! You're an incredible story teller, I really enjoyed your story. Thank you so much to allow the translation. Greetings from México