Seriously your priority should be to help Harry get stronger faster

“”It is a sacred tree to the Crone aspect of the Triple Goddess, and is associated with the Waning and Dark Moon. Blackthorn is also known as keeper of dark secrets. Blackthorn is linked with wars, wounds and death, and sacred to the Scottish Crone Cailleachthe Divine Hag.””

One of the best fanfictions I've read, some parts were a bit cliché, but I liked that the magical progress was relatively realistic, he had to work for it to become strong. It's a pity there were so few battle scenes.

The MC is mentally compromised. When angry, he can't even freaking control what he does.

It really ruins the immersion.

What is the point of reading when the MC will ALWAYS FUCK UP due to his emotions? He ALWAYS does something stupid. It's pathetic.

This is not a good plot. It is just needless stupid drama. In fact, making MC not remember the Horcruxes was a very bad move. That is the only thing that makes the story worse and it all led to this 'Harry might become evil' BS the author is coming up with now.

Honestly? Voldy and his Death Munchers can prove enough challenge for the MC. There is already a freaking WAR incoming and yet, the author is giving even more shit on MCs shoulders. With even the slightest butterfly, Voldy could change his game plan and become a massively dangerous opponent even for the reincarnated MC. But instead of doing that, the author is doing some BS with MC not remembering horcruxes.

Just... sigh.

I loved the concept of it but I would've loved for the story to have gotten the space to let the world be known more than merely glanced. It felt like the story was a clever list of bullet point events that were expanded enough to become a story; I may be being harsh as I listened to it in one go as opposed to reading it and am judging it from that perspective.

Despite the taboo placed on Ron, it really feels odd to not have his past life have a greater impact than it had. You'd think being an american muggle for nearly twice as long as you had been an english wizard would have a grander impact than making you more competent with opposite sex.

I love the relationship between Ron and Fleur but it was definitely not a main aspect of their relationship. It served to give this Ron a motive and anchor with most scenes helping reinforce their pairing but very little of it, apart from the Yule Ball, felt like a proper romance and more like we knew they were an endgame pairing and there was no need to do more than imply all the dates and moments that happened over the years. Her acceptance of Ron being from another world although given some reasoning felt like a rushed thing to hand-wave away some good old romantic drama. Although Fleur is not the focus, she does manage to have some interesting characterization, mainly her coming to Britain with the aims of becoming an Unspeakable from the very beginning.

The lack of Hermione is a big drawback for me, don't get me wrong, I do thing the growing distant due to ever polarizing personalities and interests is a natural and logical thing to do. But frankly it wasn't executed so much as it was hand-waved to have happened. The story could have dearly used some scenes of Hermione noticing the shift in Ron's personality, of her choosing other friends over them, of her shaking of her nascent crush on Ron, of disagreements in morals and methods which drove them apart. Hermione might not have gone along with their choices but the lack of her even attempting to find out about the change in Ron or trying to help them with everything, left a sense of a whole missing aspect to the story. Why wouldn't Ron use Hermione to help fight the war in spite of his lack of romantic interest?

Overall, its a lovely work for any SI/OC fanfic readers looking for a more quick paced read and who want to skip the whole childhood and early Hogwarts years of a reincarnation. Although there is romance, I wouldn't recommend it to anyone looking for a story with that in mind. This story is more so about attaining magic to defeat the big-bad than it is about characters, romance, drama, or the like; but it still made me attached to Ron and wishing for a more expansive epilogue.

Great choice with Fleur

Lol, for all his talk of being 20ish or whatever, he is certainly still acting like a child. Can you REALLY blame stupidity(?) around females on teenage hormones?

Excelente historia, realmente magnífica. Solo me quedó una pregunta, pues me dijiste que imagináramos el resto, al final si sobrevivió Snape o no?

Yeah this is getting shit… i feel like the idea has merit and some aspects of this fic is pretty good but the way you wrote it and how you seen to rush everything makes this a pretty… below average read. Hopefully if you get some practice you can come back and rewrite it? Idk. Your choice. Props to you for actually completing this fic though! Even some of the most popular fics on this platform arent completed.

Theres no way that the OC doejst have neither natual ocumency or the gamers mind. Nobody could grt over sometjing like this so quickly.

Hahah great story and even greater ending. I enjoyed it a lot, I'm glad it wasn't dragged out.

Damn I thought there was the tried and true cliche of because he has something related to Nundu (family line, Prewett. And Patronus) means he has total sway over it lmao.

Bruh...

Damn... I didn't expect this to happen... Evil indeed.