| Reviews for Voleur D'âme |
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   odonnellzoo99 chapter 25 . 7/30/2022 I thought the battle was good but it was a bit difficult to follow everything that was happening. If your intention was to portray the chaos of battle, then you succeeded. If you meant for the reader to be able to easily follow everything that was happening, then I think it could have been better... or maybe I'm just tired. |
| odonnellzoo99 chapter 11 . 7/30/2022 Opinion, not suggestion, since the story is complete: the pace is a bit fast but I’d rather that than too slow. Too slow isn’t always boring, but it frequently makes for an unsatisfactory ending. You are given all of the details during the story due to the slow pace, but then the conclusion is inconsistent with the rest of the story because it is almost impossible to wrap up every detail without dragging it out too long. |
| J4C00B0 chapter 2 . 7/25/2022 yeah... this crushed my hopes of liking the story |
| J4C00B0 chapter 1 . 7/25/2022 MErge is Mid, Wand seems fine, I like anything that makes the stupid magic system of trolling a little better |
| SpecHQ chapter 3 . 7/25/2022 I hope our SI enjoys being fish bait lol unless the teachers still decide to use her sister for Task 2? |
| Sweptbackmass34 chapter 45 . 7/19/2022 Absolutely loved this story. Great work mate. 3 |
| silver hands chapter 45 . 7/16/2022 Worthy of a standing ovation. Great story, and I'm sad to see it over. |
| silver hands chapter 25 . 7/16/2022 Excellent dueling descriptions. Gives a real feel of power levels, and how far ahead Dumbledore and voldemort are. |
| silver hands chapter 17 . 7/16/2022 You've really struck a chord here. Harry and Ron have such an intriguing and utterly original relationship here. Excellent set up, and excellent finish for this little interaction. Bravo. |
| silver hands chapter 4 . 7/15/2022 It's a nice original, to more of a degree than less, view of magic. But the quote by grindlewald is a twist I've never seen before. And that is saying something. Well done. |
| silver hands chapter 3 . 7/15/2022 I am slightly drunk and just watched an episode of Seinfeld. I read the second half of the chapter in Jerry's monologue voice which worked surprisingly well, and had a ball of a time. |
| MissyMoeDoe chapter 41 . 7/13/2022 Oh please don't make Harry bad. I can deal with and even love morally gray Harry but just don't make him bad. |
| MissyMoeDoe chapter 36 . 7/13/2022 Please don't turn Ron bad or Ron and Harry against each other. |
| MissyMoeDoe chapter 27 . 7/13/2022 I enjoyed this chapter. |
| MissyMoeDoe chapter 16 . 7/12/2022 Oh no. I've actually grown to care about your characters. Please, don't turn Harry or Dumbledor bad. |