oh shitake this wont end well
she still used her wand to disillusion herself so it wasnt wandless it was slient not wandless what missing between lucy saying they can go if they hand over the orb and bell

when has tonks seen war? the war was over while she was a kid and this one is more cold war with a few battles here and there at the current time. remus and sirus are the only veterans
war is here and the order are hypocrites they send children into war before remus sirius james lily were all but children in the eyes of magic freshly grads going on to see the wider world. people die that is one of the prices for war.

The issue is Grindelwald you made the same. Ron's mind rape was super important to the point it would solve the story far too early and change everything even more.

What then was Grindelwald's? With how he did everything exactly as canon knows it he couldn't have known HP much if at all, so what was hidden from him and why?

It is the largest failing of the story along with your clear F U to Hermione.

Wtf is with the lack of Hermione? It is like she never mattered and is really standing out.

Also how did he forget Jr? Wait I know, plot hand wave just like with the horcrux

harry could prove it using his memories of that night mostly of tom returning and the death eaters appearing and speaking out about how they werent controled and use the memories of the other years to drive his point and cred home. lies not fis reborn not rebord

seems harry slightly more affected by his mother protection and the horcruxes along with the ritual aftermath.

Flirting isn't supposed to lead anywhere? How old was the SI to be!oeve that? Young teen with zero experience in the real world?

Amusing how he is shifting blame for changing things on purpose so it isn't his fault. He is partially at fault, he knew enough he could have stuck to canon easily but refused to which means he made the choice to change things.

Guessing you don't like Hermione? Since you refuse to include her in any room or studying or really bother talking to her.

The other thing I noticed is how much of shitty weak writing it is to force him to forget about horcruxes. Would have been better to make it so he simply never read or watched the final stuff.

whst happened to harry trial? or did fudge get in trouble over sirius and barty and peter?

hmm interesting ron hyper focus on himself comes back to bite him the twins will have their revenge
ron kissed her just last chapter and learnt she liked out of nowhere kisses and such so this been the first is a lie also they have hugged and cuddled before some of which he started both parents know or at least suspect they are dating ron mentioned his parents knew or suspected when they went on their date

why didnt he just vanish all the things in the graveyard saves time? also he hasnt really helped harry much nor done much to combat barty as you pointed out he forgot him basically and got to short side and had blinders on to only his life and his gains

interesting
yeah ginny what harry would miss most yeah right they barely know each other and ginny still fangirl at this time. nevile would of fit the same amount as ginny or one of the twin why not go with what they did inn cannon the dates to the ball

why would him going to the ball or dating fleur matter? just him been merged changes things him wanting to do things changes things him actting different changes things he didnt seem to care much about him not going after hermione for the same reason as him been angry with himself over has kids with hermione just as fleur does with bill. yet he seems fine with those kids been born yet is angry and out of sorts in regards to bill and fleurs?
also why is harry and ron distant from each other shouldnt ron be tryign to help harry as much as he can and get harry to change in how he views the world how he does things and not to lessen and weaken himself so much in all that he does. the theory is that harry act how he does to fit in to balance out his friends. but if ron does the work and is even better then most if no where near hermione harry would change his work ethic too

sirius hasnt told him the quote yet and he did so in fifth year not second.
interesting of the witches we know who are near or over the age of 17 are limited tonks and fleur been the only ones mentioned to be close to said ages

one was the room i assume what was number 2? the chamber and stairs? for the fanfic always right thing?
best way is he is now the heir defeating the former heir thrices by now and having a slightly connection to the slytherin house via peverells

Really enjoyed - thanks for a good read!