Hehe how nice maybe he can bag a Veela :)

Very nice honestly I also hate dumbledore dude hasn’t done a single positive thing for magical Britain Aor hogwarts and definitely never helped Harry

And agree that shouting spells is ducking ridiculous

Holy shit! I don't want to be a spoilsport, but you won, that chapter was a culmination of awesomeness, you won't be able to do better in the last 10 (but please, prove me wrong).

I loved Dumbledore's plot - it was cruel, wise, symbolic - I don't have words, but together with Grindelwald being just like Ron, you build something extremely strong.

I honestly didn't expect to read a finished story when I started this. I never bother checking if a story is marked as complete or not. This was a very pleasant surprise. The whole story was quite enjoyable.

Did Grindelwalds mind have that many restrictions to the fact that his life played out basically the same as Canon? Its hard to believe to be fair.

So... first off. The dialogue is a bit clunky. ALMOST feels like this is written by a non-english speaker. Due to the way the MC(and others) talk. But the writing is fine, no typo's that I;ve seen. Grammar is mostly fine as well.
Hope the MC is a proper munchkin. Performing rituals for self-enhancement. Practicing/Mastering all kinds of magic, not just what is taught at Hogwarts. So Mind Magic, Blood/Flesh Magic, Soul Magic, Enchanting, Wards, Alchemy, Sex Magic, etc...
Use modern Medicine knowledge combined with magic to make yourself immortal, or try to figure out how to. Instead of relying on methods that are over 500 years old. (Horcrux's and philosopher's stones)
Use the Repair charm(or enchantments with the same effect) to make easy money. Repairing junk, cars, antiques, houses, etc... Invest money in known successes in the "muggle" world.
Learn all kind of construction charms and combine it with common sense to build a nice home. like transfiguring stone to water, pouring it into a mold, then turn it back, or studying chemistry to use charms and transfiguration to actually change the composition of materials, so you can change coal to carbon to diamond or something.
Mastering secrecy and detection charms, maybe even buy yourself an island if you make enough money, then hide it.

i don't get why he helps harry with the ritual and not fleur. his actual girlfriend...

An excellent tale with a fitting end! Thank you for completing your story, I hope to enjoy more in the future :)

Story is not bad, but I find it extremely hard to care about the people that are in danger everyone besides Harry, oc and Fleur just feels so incredibly filler

masterpiece

Too much BS in that... He blustered about it, even though he did it purely on accident, clearly not really meaning to.

I do agree that his father is rather absorbed in his self-righteousness. But he is no pussy. A tad incompetent overall, sits on a moral high-horse. But not a pussy, he's facing issues, not running from them.

Umbridge has some low cunning, but she's too stupid to stay put when she should. I doubt she'd be out. Also a tad early for for Flour and Ron, but I don't really care. She's 18, or close to at this point. And "Ron" lived another life. It's fine in my book.

Not to mention that I already don't condemn those above 15 getting it on, so long as it doesn't involve massive age differences. 3 years is not massive.

Well, she's almost there in her last year. Just bend your rules a vague tad. She'll be 18 by the time anything sexual is even on the table.

The trace is not on the fkn wands! It reacted to Dobby performing magic around Harry for fcks sake!His wand wasn't even close. Why does everyone believe this crap?

So many sharks jumped in just the first 2 chapters.
And with the obnoxious self-insert / Gary Stu Ron, coupled with OOC wallpaper support characters, this became unreadable quite quickly.