Is it just me, or am I the only sick of Earth being drawn into wars because of Black Ops stupidity? Like seriously, can we come up with a new idea?

Ugh, got cut off on my last comment. As i was saying, they had a colony devestated. its a good story and i am enjoying it. i loved the mass effect games, but i always hated how the council were so condesending. I also love Bioshock and i wasnt sure how this would work, but its definently a good story idea and it works. Seen it recommended before but never read it because there are some xovers that i dont think would work, but this one does. Keep up the good work. Would like to see more of it.

Personally,, i like the idea of an OP human story. its my guilty pleasure to read, but i am enjoying this story, because yes, humans are powerful, but they still lose people, ships and even had a xolony

Hope the hiatus ends soon and hopefully we’ll see a proper Bioshock esc location soon, something akin to Rapture (not the ship) and Columbia. Space station doesn’t count cause well… that’s generic sci-fi so it has to be somewhere that’s not normally seen in a sci-fi setting with a steampunk aesthetic as a big part of Bioshocks appeal is it’s unique aesthetic and design and not just it’d philosophy, characters, or powers.

Maria Skłodowska-Curie. She was proud to be Polish, used to correct people and inteoduce by her full name.

Ty

In in in in not on on on on. We think in our head not on. Why? Every time one should use in you use on instead. Like is this on purpose? I don't understand man.

first 4 chapters, and things to say

1- Andrew Ryan would be rolling in his grave seeing the massive state control that exists in the Alliance and how Rapture seems to be okay with that

2- AI rights? you're kidding, if the AI rebels against the human it's solely and simply the fault of the person who made it for not programming it well, those garbage from Detroit BH have no sustenance

3- the human population is very low and is growing very slowly for what it should be, if the planet earth alone has resources for 20B people if there are no problems with the market and distribution, the population should be at least 100B.

everything else is interesting

lmao and here i thought cerberus is not here this just got shitier than i expected

I enjoyed reading this story. I look forward to the day when the Hiatus ends. I wish you many happy days with your romantic partner and much success with your book.

#prothean approval

Hope things work out for you.
Have a great week.

where do you post the artwork?

Take your time we will be here when you return

Damn and here I had hoped that he wouldn't be indoctrinated