Reviews for The End of Eternity: Rise of the Terran Alliance
Ryuuze chapter 9 . 8/27
The whole hostility to remote controlled drone warfare is honestly dumb, and no "highly intelligent" soldier would ever discount the effectiveness of such weapons.. Missiles with targeting systems are also drones after all. And it's the same thing that was repeated when guns replaced swords. Probably also when swords replaced rocks and limbs.. and when people started wearing armor. If you want honor, go do some pankration or something.
Guest chapter 16 . 5/7
This story reeks of reddit at times. The understanding of history is a prime example.
Agusfedredhunter chapter 13 . 4/25
Honestly, I think that when an AI accesses the concepts of metaphysics or similar in the sense of thought, it is already a living being. The truth is that the Quarians only had slaves, slaves who were learning to live and when they were ordered to be murdered, they defended themselves.

There's also the thing that not all Quarians during the Morning War would have seen the Geth as enemies.
budjul1611975 chapter 10 . 2/3
"Manticore"? Dark Angel?
budjul1611975 chapter 4 . 2/2
Sihnon planet?Demeter? I get a bit of "Firefly" vibe be there a Companion or two,maybe? I aim to misbehave!
budjul1611975 chapter 2 . 2/2
Just one thing,it's not IA,it's AI.
MCJoshua117halo3 chapter 2 . 10/25/2023
id like to make a correction to my previous review about the asteroid that killed the dinosaurs impacted the earth with 15-22 terratons of TNT, with some research it was actually 72 terratons of tnt
MCJoshua117halo3 chapter 12 . 10/18/2023
explosive yields
1000 ton 1 kiloton
1000 kiloton 1 megaton
1000 megatons 1 gigaton
1000 gigaton 1 terraton

the asteroid that killed the dinosaurs impacted the Earth with an estimated yield from around 15 terraton's to 22.5 terraton's of explosives

I am not sure if you have given on this story I hope its quite interesting, and I like it, I hope it will be useful for weapon yield for continuing this story or writing others, if you do not already know this, keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/12/2023
Was an enjoyable story until this chapter
JustAnotherFan217 chapter 6 . 9/6/2023
Is it just me, or am I the only sick of Earth being drawn into wars because of Black Ops stupidity? Like seriously, can we come up with a new idea?
neccowaferlover chapter 15 . 7/11/2023
Ugh, got cut off on my last comment. As i was saying, they had a colony devestated. its a good story and i am enjoying it. i loved the mass effect games, but i always hated how the council were so condesending. I also love Bioshock and i wasnt sure how this would work, but its definently a good story idea and it works. Seen it recommended before but never read it because there are some xovers that i dont think would work, but this one does. Keep up the good work. Would like to see more of it.
neccowaferlover chapter 15 . 7/11/2023
Personally,, i like the idea of an OP human story. its my guilty pleasure to read, but i am enjoying this story, because yes, humans are powerful, but they still lose people, ships and even had a xolony
Wizardwolf 1020 chapter 20 . 6/6/2023
Hope the hiatus ends soon and hopefully we’ll see a proper Bioshock esc location soon, something akin to Rapture (not the ship) and Columbia. Space station doesn’t count cause well… that’s generic sci-fi so it has to be somewhere that’s not normally seen in a sci-fi setting with a steampunk aesthetic as a big part of Bioshocks appeal is it’s unique aesthetic and design and not just it’d philosophy, characters, or powers.
Mieszak chapter 8 . 3/14/2023
Maria Skłodowska-Curie. She was proud to be Polish, used to correct people and inteoduce by her full name.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/1/2023
Ty
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