In in in in not on on on on. We think in our head not on. Why? Every time one should use in you use on instead. Like is this on purpose? I don't understand man.

first 4 chapters, and things to say

1- Andrew Ryan would be rolling in his grave seeing the massive state control that exists in the Alliance and how Rapture seems to be okay with that

2- AI rights? you're kidding, if the AI rebels against the human it's solely and simply the fault of the person who made it for not programming it well, those garbage from Detroit BH have no sustenance

3- the human population is very low and is growing very slowly for what it should be, if the planet earth alone has resources for 20B people if there are no problems with the market and distribution, the population should be at least 100B.

everything else is interesting

lmao and here i thought cerberus is not here this just got shitier than i expected

I enjoyed reading this story. I look forward to the day when the Hiatus ends. I wish you many happy days with your romantic partner and much success with your book.

#prothean approval

Hope things work out for you.
Have a great week.

where do you post the artwork?

Take your time we will be here when you return

Damn and here I had hoped that he wouldn't be indoctrinated

I hope your life doesn’t get too stressful then. I don’t mind you put some stories on hiatus. Good priorities.

Oh, a girlfriend. Welp, gg. Next update Eta is probably 5-10 years xD. Wish you well and have lots of joy

I wish you the best hope to see you again sometime in the future.

Good luck IRL

Good luck, Soo long, Thanks for all the fish!
Please send another authors note when you complete the original work, would like to check it out.

no worries.