still an amazing fanfiction and one of my favs

first of all pulse blade second of all why tf would there be survivors they got fucked and he can just reload and shoot again no need to get choked also hes way faster than felicia

Hilarious man flattery will get you everywhere was litwrally used in a comic that came oht yesterday with felicia and you made this way before then kudos to you man

"You almost got me killed, and you did actually get many police officers and random mooks killed, because you tipped everyone off and set me up."

"Oops, my bad."

"Ok, it's cool."

I mean, I knew it was gonna happen, having seen the pairing when I started reading, but I had hope that there would at least some kind of immediate distrust or consequences for this. I should've known better, this is fanfiction, where the only thing that ultimately matters is accomplishing your dreams. In this case, as in most cases, the dream is getting your ideal pairing, no matter how much pr how little sense it makes, and no matter the consequences to your story.

Part 2
The only part I liked was Yuri's part, but it felt very rushed over because it was Peter pov for most of it then it finally switched to her's, only to end and the part where Yuri was standing over Hammerhead felt like the place you should of ended the arc and not even Siver's pov was good it felt like she was dragged in just cause not because her supplies were being stolen I don't know the whole thing just messed up the flow of the story, and I'll probably skip the arc when I re-read the story.

Part 1
I know this won't mean much considering this story has been over for a while, but the whole Hammerhead/Maggie arc was such a bad read to me, it felt like it was dragging on and on and wasn't going anywhere like the I.M.C, Sinister Six and even Fisk all felt way more of threats, but they were done really well they didn't feel dragged out or rushed, but Hammerhead didn't he just felt like a lazy blind grab in the dark he shouldn't of been made a threat just because he got an advanced suit and weapons and tech for his men plus I don't even know what you were even going for with the arc cause the focus pov's of Peter and MJ just made me start to dislike you're versions of them and made me scroll through whole paragraph's and feel like I didn't miss anything.

Good stort till ch 22 why jackass killed a kid for a plot device shit thing to do

Really author
Really na im dropping why cause you in orde to get him more uh whats word emotional killed a girl so how bout you go fuck this fuck that fuck bo

Btw

also here's a thought. I always found it weird how cooper in the game wasn't effect by the ark att all. despite being in close proximity to the device twice. that has to be deadly. or life changing in some ways positive or negstive

… Reading authors note at the start brought me a cry and a laugh at the same time. Oh, how we thought 2019 was bad.

The A-10 scene made me feel so goddamn patriotic. I could almost hear the BRRRRRT!

Well, it was a good run. Thank you for writing and finishing this fic.

Well, it was a good run. Thank you for writing and finishing this fic.

The whole black cat thing is annoying and kinda forced. She is nothing but an irritant that he is letting roll over him regardless of anything

I may not have read all of this story yet (got to the beginning of the game part before taking a break), but I congratulate you on this story. It’s actually one I recommend friends. Anyway, can’t wait for the sequel, and keep up the good work!