Man I do hope stannis accepts the offers jon and dany will give him if the give him a chance to just go be lord paramount. Hes a smart man so he may. I worry for bran since we all know house stark will help the targaryens if it comes to war and bran being raised to be honorable by ned stark and then hes also being raised by stannis who's about duty plus his future wife is the princess he'll probably be torn between honor & duty or fight for his family. like how stannis was fight for areys your king or fight for Robert your brother.

Great chapter

oh yeah forgot to add, a frey queen? lmao couldn't Robert offered renly instead? or someone else instead of himself?

eh, this doesn't really fit daenerys character, even tho she dealt with the fact that her brother died she still loved him. because even after everything he's done, he was once a loving brother to her when they were younger. kinda felt like you wrote his death too lax, like you just wanted to get it over with.

"He will accept it so long as the Wildling's stick to the borders, but I'm of a mind to send a couple of hundred men to Last Hearth as an added precaution." Torrhen didn't see an issue with that, and neither did Robb." - on Torrhens return to Winterfell, did they go by land or sea? Because by sea, they could have visited the Stoneborns of Skagos, and by land, they could have made a detour to the nearby castles...unless they pass through the mountains, and Torrhen could give the clans and lords near the New Gifts a visit and see, based on his experience, and interact on who to watch out for and take not.

"She feels guilty." Torrhen explained. "That she never got to see him again." - now, based on the power of this being a screen and us not meeting face to face, i can truthfully say, that, i know this feeling of regret.

"You should go to Riverrun." - Eddard Stark, please make that a Roman Column size, and make it diverse, archers, axemen, crannogmen, etc.

"Who are you and what have you done with my sour, boring older brother?" Renly asked with a smirk." - he met a Stark, and that Stark had given him a bit of persepctive...hells, he is Stannis adopted Son and Son In Law in the future.

And i hope the sons of the harpies will not rise up, and Dany will let the Unsullied move in groups of 50 when it does happened

Awesome update :)

The only bad point of this story is jon and danny relation . First she see him as a replacement for her dead husband and second bc they are so closly related and danny is an incest child , realisticaly there are very high chance that the children they may have togheter suffer from various problems like madness and poor health . This is reality .

Renly and stannis had the best part of the chapter really shows how there characters changed from the original story

Great chapter

I am really enjoying Stannis in this story (I normally don't like the character) and his scene with Robert was really well written. I could just imagine Robert rasping and Stannis remaining steadfast in his duty as Hand of the King and writing down every word accurately.

Haha with the plague comment I was trying to be sneaky and get you to confirm a death or two ;P

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