Had hoped that Jon would have a different wife similar to Torrhen.

rip Lemondrinker

theres legit no reason for naming two sons from the same father Āegon

This guy sounds like a fucking retard.

Oh no, slave masters beware the breaker of chains is here and she’s had a LOT of practice.
*Rubs hands eagerly*

That ending explanation of cherishing the kill to the day he died was fucking badass!

Wtf is wrong with you, how can you be this good. I’m hanging on every fucking word of this story.
Jesus CHRIST, I will not apologise for using a christen slur, it’s a Godly impossibility and I love this story to shit!

I’ve got tears in my eyes. Ahhh

Never read the last story but by GOD is it really interesting to read this one without reading that one. So many things are brought up and then questions and answers to questions I’ve not heard.
It’s making my mind run into this story and it’s hard to pull back. I’m more bloody hooked than I’ve been to any story and I’ve probably read well over a thousand amazing stories so far.
This one’s nowhere close to my favourite alive just started it but it’s definitely got me more hooked by chapter two than any other.
Congrats I guess, this is an insane feeling that you managed to bring to me in such a short time.
Thank you for the read!
- Vortz

I don’t know how I feel about others remembering but I guess I could give it a chance based on your great past stories.

Wow! Fantastic story. You did a wonderful job of blending canon with your changes. This fic has been a blast to read and I would def recommend it to anyone reading this review. Great job and thank you for taking the time to write this amazing story for the rest of us to read!

I just wanted to say, I very much enjoyed the entire journey of Torrhen Stark. There were multiple times when I would tear up or jump for joy, which made me very happy. I'm not great with words, but I wanted you to know it was wonderful

Honestly a bit meh. I’ve been hoping there’d be some meaningful conflict but it doesn’t appear so. All goes according to plan, stuff I’d made, connections are built, et etc etc. various people appear ideally placed to resolve problems, like olenna, again detracting from the conflict

sad that Whymar "lets dance" royce has died a pointless death once again.

thanks for sharing your story
i liked it a lot