Well, and with this Torrhen's tale comes to an end. (For now at least XD)

A fitting tie up chapter... only question I got is: Who da heck is Eddard of Karhold? I don't remember him at all.

Benjen end was fitting. :)

And Torrhen finally got the closure of mind and heart that he has worked so hard for. He has deserved it.

Curious to see where you go next.

Happy New Year my friend :)

Yours,

Lightningscar

Dam well congratulations on taking Torrhen this far

Would it have been ideal for me if he ended up a King again yes but this was still a great ending seeing all the Starks get a happy end thanks to Torrhen

great job author! loved this fic, and will probably read it again lots of times lol

I'm glad Benjen Stark died with content and in Winterfell where he belongs in the crypts beneath Winterfell. So now Ned Stark is the last surviving child of Rickard Stark, must be terrible for him to outlive his siblings, especially Lyanna and Benjen since they were younger.

Torrhen Stark has finally found closure, and content with Mira and their children, and made his peace with the world he had left behind, and no longer needed him.

Glad to see Jon and Daenerys had a child of their own, named after a famous and infamous warrior Queen.

Very nice.

I loved the ending, does Eddard Karstark have children?

Hmm..

favourite part of this chapter was probably Robb's part about him struggling to get back on his feet and going nuts from boredom. Good explanation to the part about the Ice Spider venom though.

Not quite sure what Renly and Loras expected to happen when marching on... King's Landing I guess? What exactly did they hope to accomplish?

LOL, seems Bran is just looking for a reason to settle his difference of opinion with Renly and Loras XD

Could care less about the crown thing. Spoils of war. Also, guessing it is her hormones due to pregnancy that is making Dany act like she haven't learned anything from her past life?
Well, returning spoils of war is a nice way to show support I suppose.

Touching moment with Ned and Torrhen... at least Torr now got some well-deserved closure to who he is.

In case I don't get to review the last epilogue on Thursday: Happy New Year my friend :)

Yours,

Lightningscar

Great chapter

Renly is the Tyrells Pet, he has done nothing in the wars, he just sat in his castle, I would have liked that the North put him in his place, Ned put Loras in his place, Jon faced Renly, but I would have liked that he humiliated him, you have thought that the stormlands can abandon him, leaving only the Tyrells as an example.

I love the fic.
Much superior to the prequel, which I also liked a lot
Torrhen has been much more brother of Jon's in this one than in the prequel, which is seen as Rhaegar's heir barely showing up.
I really loved it
a greeting

Well i guess the targaryans are in power again. So what bran role now ?

Great chapter

Dam I’ve got to some catching up to do

Merry Christmas to you by the way

But boy does Torrhen kneeling to Jon or anyone not sit right with me haha

why wasn't Renly killed? Loras stripped of his knighthood? they commit treason and just get told to go home? Jon will be dead in a year if that's the case

a good fic coming to an inevitable end. I was wondering if you might be interested in an idea i had of a Bran and Marcella fic. When Joffrey falls from his horse during the Winterfell hunt and Bran blurts out that he wants to be a knight after catching Jamie and Cersei they take it as his price for silence and he becomes a lannister squre with the alternative betrothal of Bran and Marcella. Sansa goes to the Highgarden and Ned investigates the death of Jon Arryn and finds Robin looks nothing like an Arryn.

Well, Torr got a bit of what he missed the last time around: Politics XD

Not overly happy that, once again, Jon is crowned king, but cannot deny or argue with your logic and the arguements behind it to make the end result believable.
Not quite sure what to make of the logic behind the Vale and Dorne votes though, but whatever.

LOL, Loras almost stepped it in big time when talking about incest... grandma would probably slap him upside if she heard XD

Kinda annoyed that Bran just backs down in front of Ned... doesn't really have the right to try to admonish him at this point. He has become a powerful lord in his own right and isn't really a boy anymore. But oh well

Anyway, curious to see the next two epilogues chapters.

And in case you don't post next chapter before Thursday and I don't get to review it should you: Merry Christmas :)

Yours sincerely,

Lightningscar

Good ! The cowardly useless stag did not become king.