|Reviews for A Dark Night in Ba Sing Se|
| SamMason666 chapter 4 . 3/8
This is a really funny story.
| Fenris Jin chapter 4 . 3/8
Zuko as a role model was definitely more fun than it should be. Ehh.. who am I kidding, with the type of field trips he runs in canon, I'm not surprised kids love him. XD
| DragonLark chapter 4 . 1/8
Me and a friend are texting and I'm sending quotes to her cause it's one in the morning and you are a genius and she has never watched ATLA, so i MUST share with her why i sound like an engine without gas trying to start
THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR GENIUS
Have a Wonderful Wonderful day!
| Lizzalandian chapter 4 . 12/21/2019
You make the best stuff, you know that?
This is flatly fantastic
Zuko and his grudging, almost guilty efforts to be a good person :]
And Iroh- you may have been right, but you were still No Help At All
I'm glad that Song and Song's Momma found each other and Zuko gained a mini me (so cute)
And the whole 'why do you think you make such a difference' followed by 'spy play stuff' and just the "what" over and over :D
Of course I will be keeping tabs on any continuations you do, and depending I Might end up read them through the archive, y'know, for consistent positive feedback reasons
I like leaving comments- it's almost as fun as reading the fictions themselves!
| Alyce Reide chapter 4 . 12/11/2019
Oh my the hilarity! Seriously, if this were an original story instead of a fanfiction, I could see this...well, not a novel unless you expand it, but maybe a novelette or novella, with minimal editing. I know I joke about a lot of stuff, but I do not joke about publishing.
| Alyce Reide chapter 2 . 12/9/2019
Ack. How is there so much amazingness in just two (admittedly long) chapters?
| Olivebirdy chapter 4 . 11/19/2019
I really like how you write Maijin's perspective. Quiet and more observant than other perspectives. Thoughtful, but quiet.
| badtothebone chapter 4 . 11/8/2019
Mei-Lin, Keishin, and Maijing are super OCs. They're distinctive and interact well with Zuko. Mei-Lin was so adorable when she followed through on her mission with Iroh even though she no longer needed to (plus her copying Zuko's mannerisms). I think it's wonderful how much of an impact Zuko has made on those kids in such a short time. Life is definitively happening wherever Zuko goes :)
| badtothebone chapter 3 . 11/8/2019
I just died laughing when Mei-Lin repeated those instructions on how to confirm she was sent by Zuko to Iroh :D Glad those kids got out. I think this is going to top Keishin's list of bad nights out.
| Houndini chapter 1 . 11/7/2019
I saw the post on your tumblr and now I refuse to listen to fic with anything other than the Benny Hill theme
| Luna Lillyth chapter 4 . 10/28/2019
Your work is as amusing as ever.
Where do you even get the motivation to write stuff like this?
| MysticAnime chapter 4 . 10/23/2019
This is the story that I didn’t realize I needed in my life, yet now that I’ve read it twice, I feel a part of my soul satisfied and complete. Thank you for writing and sharing this. I wish I could see the stuff that is on Tumblr. But no tumblr account. But this might be the thing that gets me to make a tumblr account.
I do hope you write more for this. But understand if this is it. It’s still really good and I love it. Thanks again!
| Bridgefall chapter 4 . 10/22/2019
I can't even. I love your stories, going to read them aaaaaaaall.
Love so much. Thank you for gifting then to us.
| Regis JN chapter 4 . 10/21/2019
This was fun. Zuko always makes me smile.
| Sauwk chapter 4 . 10/20/2019
Somehow it kinda remind me of Terry Pratchett 's "Guards! Guardsand that good!