|Reviews for In Time's Flow|
| yahiro365 chapter 12 . 4/4
That's the Dimitri pep talk I wanted to hear. Very nice
| HuluOriginal chapter 12 . 3/30
Really love how consistently solid your characters are. It makes the interaction and story feel much more organic.
| AppleMarineXX chapter 12 . 3/29
It only really hit me recently how much worldbuilding you're doing in your writing, I love it.
| PrinceMittens chapter 3 . 3/27
I can totally understand that feeling of dissatisfaction you are talking about w regards to your own writing. I often feel the same. :((
| Hunter of Entities chapter 12 . 3/27
How would Byleth feel if he were faced with Sothis again? After suffering what is a bare minimum centuries on his own... Only to be faced with the source of his suffering and the only one who could understand what he feels
| Jimbobob5536 chapter 12 . 3/26
Oh Aelfric, you useless fop. You will never have Sitri. NEVER.
Guess the Ashen Wolves will become relevant to you now, Byleth.
| Vladimir-spider chapter 12 . 3/26
I see that Byleth didn't buy the DLC and will now encounter new troubles because of this...
| Quasi11 chapter 12 . 3/26
Yet another great chapter. It’s always a big highlight to my day when I get a notification for this story!
The scene between Byleth and Dimitri was one of my favorites in the story so far. This version of Byleth in particular would understand Dimitri’s pain better than basically anyone, and would understand how important it is to temper Dimitri’s rage
| KeeltheSwift chapter 12 . 3/26
Isn't the Death Knight a lieutenant of the "Flame Emperor" and not Thales? There was a whole scene where they granted the DK. "Use him however you please."
Anyway, I see you're starting to implement Ashen Wolves story into this as a "new factor". Looking forward to what you do with it, though there will always be the question of "what changed"? Why had this never happened before? and so on.
| Diaspared chapter 12 . 3/26
I suspect the second person is frowned upon thanks to an overabundance of reader/[insert character here] sex stories.
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/3
Please make a fanfiction of Robin, Corrin, and Byleth!
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/3
Good luck with your dissertation! Hopefully you come back to this story but focus on school first. Your writing is really enjoyable
| Dandaman5 chapter 11 . 3/3
I absolutely adore time loop stories and this is one of the best i've seen. Can't wait to see where this goes.
| Tigereey chapter 11 . 3/3
Thanks for updating :) good luck with your phd
| Sonikah chapter 11 . 3/3
I'm really glad to see this continuing.