I FINALLY FOUND IT
I was reading this fic a long time ago and I lost it, I loved it so much, Im so happy I found it again.

anyways, time to re read.

Such a great Story.
I Loved to read that. I would have Loved about that Exchange year and what would Happen between Alexander and Harry.

Please continue this story

Nvm its dead fic

Who is the RO?

the XianXia flying sword lmao

That was wonderful! One of the best Harry Potter related stories I've read. Everyone complains that it's too long and random plots are thrown and also doesn't follow canon much but that's how a story should be. The author creates a whole new character(main protagonist) and creates a whole new perspective with in depth explanations that is purely brilliant! The plot is good and you don't know what's happening next which keeps you on your toes(it's not as predictable). I love how he (the MC) doesn't bother Harry much to a point so he can predict the future and let Harry build character. I would love to see his confrontation with Lord Voldemort cuz he already on his radar(it came clear in his class with Quirinus Quirrell)

I read everything till now and give this story 10/10. As to the author I really hope you didn't abandoned this Fic and that you come back and finish it

why are the dialogues like this? he's talking like he had to explain everything. just give them a short response. This shit bores me.

Loved this story so far. Hope one day it will be continued to see what will happen next!

114 chapters to only make it to the start of 4th year and then the author goes MIA. Following in the hopes they come back one day.

I'm kind of over the drama between the Whithorns and the Fawleys. I wish this would go back to dealing with Hogwarts and the events surrounding canon

Well he deserves to be whisked away by a portkey. You literally just ran into an enemy who taunted you and you carelessly do something like that? I don't feel bad for whatever stupidity the MC has to deal with

it seems I was wrong about it being less focused on hogwarts.
what's the point of him being reincarnated? it barely plays into the plot other than the future knowledge, and that could just be given through a vision of some kind.
this seems good so far.

I think too many ideas are being used at once in this story, or at least it seems like you are trying to do too many things, and I for one am having trouble deciding which one is the main storyline, because each of them on their own are enough to carry their own individual stories, but they're all crammed into this one fic. I also feel like tge implications each idea brings completely contradict or intersect with each other in ways that make sense.
in short I think that too many things that change things are happening at once, and I don't think that they will mix wellI think that mage tower and the nimbus vendetta could work together, but the scale of the whithorn family is just too large, especially if it's going to be a secondary or primary plot.
I personally think that leaning on the mage tower plot would make for an interesting story, and I would appreciate the whithorn vendetta if it was just in tge scope of "they stole a business from my grandfather" rather than "we have to find out how to take down an evil worldwide business enterprise without getting assassinated".
another opinion I have is that cannon has been changed too much for me to enjoy personally, from where I can see it going, I don't see the point of having it happen during cannon or in the uk, hogwarts seems to have been more of an afterthought.
I'd expect a hp fic based during cannon to be more focused on hogwarts or the uk, but more focus is put on stuff in other countries.

I never knew wizards can use a broom bc i always thought they can only controlle there magic when they are 11 and get there wand and then could only use a broom