Reviews for The Straw Hat's Pyro |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the story it is good and natsu is a lot alike luffy it makes sense he gets along with him. I just don't know how I feel about pairing natsu with Robin as Robin doesn't seem his type and is like luffy, natsu is emotionally stunted etc and I always thought he liked Lucy in the show. though I am curious when the other slayers will appear and maybe iconic characters such as erza, lucy and gray and other guild members. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent update |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story but I have a question what about Natsu's and the other dragon slayers motion sickness. I can understand natsu not being motion sick of merry and sunny as they are friends and home so he won't be motion sick but other transportation and not all others think of vehicles as such unless there was something to help the dragon slayers etc. I am just saying we can't forget the slayers weakness to motion sickness and I can see natsu not sick on merry or sunny as he will consider ithem friends and home so he won't think of them as death trap vehicles and maybe rocket man too but chopper will be their soon and can get medicine for it. it is a good story though but I am just wondering about the motion sickness? |
![]() ![]() His name is Gin you idiot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like that Zoro points the idioticy with a dragon teaching magic that's ment to kill other dragons |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a little slow but I'll wait |
![]() ![]() ![]() The prologue is small and simple which is alright. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story is going very well with Natsu's inclusion in the pack, but I can't wait to see how you will work out the romance between Natsu and Robin as strange as it sounds. I love this couple even though it's one of the rarest I've seen. |
![]() ![]() Pearl getting owned by Natsu was awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! |
![]() ![]() Can you put in Natsu’s Dragon Slayer’s Secret Art Revision, Wendy’s Dragon Slayer’s Secret Art and Gajeel’s Dragon Slayer’s Secret Art Revision. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep it up I love this story please. |
![]() ![]() Really good chapter. I think it's good that you let Natsu out on the fight between Mihawk and Zorro. I think he would do exactly what you wrote. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() Nice rendition of Zoro, and I like the foreshadowing. How many slayers are in the grand line? |
![]() ![]() This story is amazing. Natsu acts like Natsu would if he were in the One Piece world and the pairing is pretty rare that’s good too. I like Natsu x Robin |