Take the time you need.

I do not want to be that guy but I'm going to be that guy don't you think Robin is just a little too old for Natsu. She's 28 he's 17. She's literally 11 year's older than him. It would make more sense if natsu was at robins home island instead of this. But this is your story and it's a good story so far.

Well that is more than understandable besides this story is more than worth the wait.

Well. I understand getting so I can wait til September, this is getting really good.

fair enough

I like where you've set Natsu, so he doesn't overwhelm the OP world, but grows in it like everyone else.

Yea this story has really high potential. Natsu is equal to Zorro in terms of Strenght? Zorro is equal to Luffy, so that means Natsu is equal to Luffy? I would love to see a fight between Natsu and Ace. I hope you make a scene we’re Natsu try’s to eat Ace xD. Btw who do you think is Stronger, Natsu or Ace?( I think Natsu is stronger, because he is immune and can ate Fire to get Stronger).

Will Natsu and Luffy fight?

Can You Put in Natsu’s Lightning Fire Dragon Mode, Dragon Force, Savage Dragon Fire Form, Hellfire Mode, E.N.D Form, Dragon Slayer’s Secret Art Revision, Igneel’s Power, Fire Dragon King Mode, Seven Flames Dragon Mode, Dragon Slayer’s Secret Art, Dragonification, Black Fire Dragon Mode and Ignia’s Powers In Straw Hat’s Pyro.

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! By the way will Natsu learn Haki and is he E.N.D?

Really Good so far. Hope to see more.

This story has a lot of potencial! I hope you keep updating! By the way how strong will Natsu be at the start of the story?

Little but too soon to provide relevant feedback.