The story is a masterpiece in gaslighting, I was searching for a Calypso story this one has her in the feature panel and when does she appear? In Ch 18 in the last 3 lines before the end with 4 words text altogether.

Fuck this shit don't put a character as featured in the fucking story if said character doesn't appear at all.

If you ignore all that, it was a decent story main char is edgy emo with a batman backstory and slightly overpowered but tolerable.

The interactions are quite good but the plotlines go all over the place and lose their relevance fast.

I give it 5/10 it follows the main plot down to a T and ends up being more of the same.

Very confused about the fact Calypso is the first name listed in the characters meaning she should be the MC yet is not seen in the story at all... especially since the story is complete with a cliffhanger where she would be introduced next chapter. If you are (like me) searching for good stories about Calypso then this doesn't quite hit the mark... Though still a decent story, not sure if there is a sequel continuation but was good enough.

First Review of 2025:

Yo Greed, wassup buddy?

Hey, you ever get around to the sequel?

Dang, now I'm super curious! Shouldn't have expected anything less from Greed haha

How did his green eyes become brown? He is supposed to have almond shaped sea-green eyes?

I thought she was gonna kiss him on the lips

So, this is just a canon retread. Percy's presence affects absolutely nothing, and he's incompetent for the sake of the plot. The author is trying to tell the reader one thing, that Percy is efficient and reliable; and then shows something completely different, with Percy being . . . legally blind, I guess? It beggars belief how he was unable to find Nico or Bianca in the dance hall, even with how absurdly long he took to think about the Camp Half-Blood coalition.

This was an amazing read. The story itself was very nice and love the little twist you gave us! Hope you post soon bro

Jesus this is dark.

Escanor?

Loved that story. Now I hope for a sequel

Interesting story. I really enjoyed the flow of this one. Can't wait for the sequel!

what a shit ending. and a lie in the A/N

I should've f*cking known. I started the story in hopes that this Greed story (that's actually completed for once) will have start/middle/end. Instead it's the usual, unfinished cliffhanger in close to the worst possible place. What a load of unsatisfying **** (literally one more chapter with Artemis' explanation would at least redeems this a bit).

Just a Spade casually dropping by