Reviews for Incompatible System |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story. I come back every so often to read it again. Really hope it's not abandoned as it's great work. Interesting premise and would love to read more. |
![]() ![]() Thank you for an interesting and intriguing story. It's been fun to read. Would love to see it continued one day. Cheers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really liking this chapter. Can practically see the fight happening. Smoke and ash blocking all but the light of the flames. And your explanation as for why Ranma didndt just go tornado on his enemy is nice. And gives a good reason for him to not one shot the whole thing. More fights written as well as that please. signed the captivated audience |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this story you've created is simply incredible, so much depth and thought has gone into it and it is really a shame you haven't updated it for a long time now, I'd understand if you don't want to anymore but zi would really appreciate it if you did, I still want to see how the quarians and the geth get to join humanity and the thranx, even if we did get s glimpse of that in a previous chapter. Thank you for making this, I really enjoyed reading your fic and I hope you have a nice day |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story, keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quarians could be a valuable asset, as long as they dont freak out over AI |
![]() ![]() ![]() is this story ever going to have any new chapter since god knew when. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I honestly do not helieve the US is in any danger of a civil war, civil unrest of a few thousand people? Sure, but we are no where near as divided as other periods in US history. Particularly the pre-Civil period. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story. love the domino effect with the geth tryi g to contact the humans. fingers crossed u cone back around to this at some point. would be funny to see what the reapers/citadale would do when thry find out some ones messing with there toys. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hierarchy, not Heirarchy. "Hier(o)-" and "heir" aren't even remotely related. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the cameo by Slippery Jim! Another excellent story ... that I do wish would see more chapters. But thank you for sharing it, anyway. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And so the cycle continues. Find FF. Become engrossed in any or all of world, characters, progression, style, diligence in spelling, grammar, punctuation … Reach last available, non-final chapter. "Last updated 15 years ago" |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thank you for the chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thank you for the chapter. |