You actually modeled the fight after the Dragon ball Super Jiren fight. Props to you

"Cop out"? I would have been LIVID if Momo died or lost her memory.

please update. I love this

please update this. I love

I love this story and I hope you come back to it

Funniest fucking scene I have ever read! Loved the always sunny reference

Reading this for the 4th time and i gotta say it holds up. But if you want my advice, stop posting on this site. The community sucks, honestly. The amount of hateful comments I have seen in what has to be the best IzuMomo fic in existence is saddening. Idk if that’s what made you put this on hiatus, but it deserves recognition. I’d suggest you migrate to AO3. You are literally one if the few reasons I still have the app on my phone. This stuff is just that good.

“Hesitation bring defeat”
Sword Saint Isshin

Name: Restaurant Lady
Quirk Name: 4th Wall Awareness
Quirk Type: Mutation
Quirk Description: torrents the user the ability to perceive the fourth wall of the reality they inhabits. allowing the user to safely perceive and interact with higher beings

I was someone who was a massive fan of when i firs read it in 2020. In fact, this inspired me to get back into writing fanfiction. It will always have a special place for me.

But rereading it... it really is not what i remember. First off wirh this chapter, bakugo. This follows the trend where fanfic authos make bakugo utterly despicable, far worse than he ever was in canon. Its very cringey to read.

Another is the humor later. Some of the forced humor is really cringe, especially where inko wants to use a backlight on momos mouth. Other parts like shoto is so crazy obsessive to know izukus secret that he literally talks to imaginary barney. Wow.

And there are choices made later in the fic thst grow somewhat annoying. Like by chance momo also goes to the overhaul raid , or the choice made by izuku for eri later i wont go into detail that make no sense.

Some may call me rude for spoiling, but this story hasnt been updated in nearly two years. And with the author admitting he doesnt care for this ship and wants to focus on his izujirou fic. So hope im proven wrong and this actually updates, but my opinion on this fic has certainly changed

Good luck.

i wish someday you continue this story

...Who trained with edgeshot?

Pretty good story so far even if i do wish he won the competition completely. i do hope you write more again on it and i will put it in the following just in case. i am go and look at your other one your still writing on for now though.

Too bad he didn't figure out the full cowling but he is almost there.

Seems interesting too bad it has been on hiatus for so long. well i will probably put this in the following at least. may even read it just to keep waiting on other stories to update lol.