Probably the best God of War crossover ever. shame it was never finished

Ánimo haber si tienes tiempo/ganas de terminar la historia al ritmo que puedas, porque sin lugar a dudas es muy entretenida. Animo y que todo te vaya bien.

Disregard my previous reviewtheres plenty of character development lol.

On further thought after somewhat remembering the stories direction and turn of eventsit seems like you went for army conflict a bit too early and didnt give Kratos enough nerfs. A possible nerf would be something like losing most of his supernatural physical strength in the beginning of the story due to him being in a new realm with active enemy godsthat would open up a lot of opportunities for character development and conflict.

Still, I think this style of writing is still enjoyablealthough after reading quite a few of them, I'd enjoy it more if it were humorous. Enjoyed/enjoying it anyway, so thanks again

Rereading after a few years, and after reading a few other critical reviews;

I'll admit the criticism that theres not enough struggle does hold some weight, but the nature of his character doesnt make for any interesting conflict until much later in the games story. Still enjoying it so far, thx again

will you continue this story maybe add god of war Ragnarök as well the armors and draupnir spear and guardian shield aswell as scofnuing sword and Mimir

Okay good, i reached this chapter and seeing Kratos “like a daughter to me” gives me some ease, although i do hope that never changes

Im really hoping you dont turn this into a romance between the two, i’ve been seeing signs already and been pushing through them but im starting to think you actually are trying that. This is near the end of the first game and Faye just recently died, and he has a son waiting at home. He wouldnt move on so quickly, especially with someone who is essentially a random stranger that he met not that long ago as well. This isn’t someone where a normal amount of human time would cause a relationship to bloom, this is Kratos, a man who in madness killed his first wife and daughter and had their ashes turn his skin white, someone who somehow found love again despite everything after a long long time and she died recently and has a son waiting for him at home who also would not take kindly to his father bringing home a new mom after his died recently, and also kratos, who has walls around his heart and feelings as strong as a fortress wall that only let’s his son in. The fact that he’d have a romance with Lydia would be extremely out of character. This is only chapter 12 though so im hoping im wrong

It’s decent so far, but you don’t need to keep repeating Kratos’s name over and over again, sometimes repatition can be a good way to convey things but needless repatition can feel redundant and break the flow of the story, turning an action into almost something of a check list. “He did this, he then did this, he did this” it’s almost like bullet points and not a paragraph. just something to keep in mind, then again this is just chapter 1 so it’s possible you fixed that lol

too many big paragraphs, really hard to read.

This is one of my favorite fanfics on this entire site and the best fanfic for both GoW and Skyrim. I find it sad that it was never finished but satisfied with what it ended on. Every word was well placed and outside of some walls of text in the first few chapters I thought it was wonderfully written. I'm glad I found this story. You're an amazing writer and I have to wonder if you ever ended up writing that Worm/Warhammer crossover on Spacebattles or another site.

Just a point: in GoW canon, Zeus did not kill Kronos.
He imprisoned him first with Pandora's temple then in the Underworld, but did not actually kill him.
Kratos, on the other hand, did kill him and extracted a stone out of him.

I like that Kratos is not Dragonborn.

It wouldn't even make sense, but having taken his spot, I was worried he would also get the power.

Where is the rest hm?
Its not to late to continue this
Because it is amazing the way you wrote the characters

If this story has been dropped, then can you at least have the decency to say so. It’s not cool to leave everyone hanging.