|Reviews for To Live Again|
| rayhan chapter 1 . 2/14
love how introspective you wrote kenshin in the first chapter! can't wait for more
| Rydia16 chapter 1 . 1/19
hooooooo whats next!
| Ancient Xana of the Old Forest chapter 1 . 9/15/2019
When next chap will be ready! Is really beautiful where this is going... Please add mire romance but not just with Battou, but kenshin too!
| KureNo11 chapter 1 . 8/27/2019
definitely looking forward to reading next chapters!
| Jester's Pet Oriole chapter 1 . 8/26/2019
I haven't reviewed a fanfic in so long...
So the start was good. Just remember to watch your tenses throughout your narrative. Like:
Was: 'that she is quite a beautiful girl, she was still just that, a girl.'
Is: 'noticing that she was quite a beautiful girl, she was still just that, a girl.'
Was: She wouldn't take so long to return, and she had promised Yahiko she will (she'll) come back early to continue his trainings:
Is: She wouldn't take so long to return, and she had promised Yahiko she would (she'd) come back early to continue his training.
| Hikari chapter 1 . 8/25/2019
So fantastic, more please!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/24/2019
I like it!
| CL chapter 1 . 8/23/2019
I like it! Please continue :)
| Shab chapter 1 . 8/23/2019
Please keep writing. Idc how many of these there are not everyone writes the same way. I look forward to reading the rest of this wonderful story. Thank you for taking the time and courage to write and share with all of us.